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Transformations


Grass blades leaking green
Leaves succumb to conversion
Song bird is silenced




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Inspired by Brian Strands "IMAGES OF FALL " contest!

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Date: 12/10/2009 1:00:00 AM

Song bird singing'

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 12/9/2009 7:41:00 AM

Imaginative visual to this one Abe.. enjoyed.. and thankxxx for the comments on my poetry.. I am with u on GO DALLAS.. although the GIANTS are my fav team but I want to see Dallas win the division because I loathe the Eagles ... I am always ready for some excellent football.. wish it were on seven nights a week... if u want to read a treat posted by Carolyn Devonshire "Football Potpourri" a collaboration or "Football Follies" which I wrote this Monday after Sunday's full TV games.. luv..

Sara Kendrick

Date: 9/17/2009 7:30:00 AM

Nicely done. God speed in the contest. Keep writing. Sara

James Fraser

Date: 9/14/2009 1:24:00 PM

The Fall in amazing describe in so few words, wonderful>>James

Carrie Richards

Date: 8/28/2009 3:57:00 PM

I love the freshness, the unusual twist of the beautiful haiku, Abe !! Excellent writing!! ~ love, Carrie

Christopher Higgins

Date: 8/26/2009 12:57:00 PM

Soup mail.

Gert W. Knop

Date: 8/26/2009 4:19:00 AM

I also like "song bird is silenced"! Nice Haiku, Abe, and thanks for your comment. Gert

Raul Moreno

Date: 8/25/2009 6:35:00 PM

The first line is excelent, Grass blades leaking their lush green hue, fading into the pale yellow. Nice work...Raul

Date: 8/25/2009 2:51:00 PM

What an interesting perspective captured in just three lines--so creative. Nice use of imagery and personification. Good luck in the contest. Thank you for your kind comment. Karen