Transformation

The flames dwindle to a flicker in the fireplace
I watch the stippled ceiling dance 
like stars in an exploding new universe
My chest heaves
In, then out
In silent anticipation of my transformation
From a world of emptiness
To one of a promised bliss,
And in one last gesture i blow a kiss
To this vanishing life
I reach out for those everlasting arms
To guide my tattered soul
Through a tunnel of light and love
And all thats wrong is now made right
I step from mortality to eternity's light,
Peace, joy, love fill my hollow shell
I wake up, a new ode to tell.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2013

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February 6, 2013 at 7:46 PM
Carl, i love the new tale you will tell... Does transformation feel good?? I enjoyed the purity from this poem... always~ LINDA
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February 6, 2013 at 11:32 AM
Absolutely brilliant, my good friend! Superb writing... have a great day! Jack
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February 5, 2013 at 5:06 PM
I enjoyed your poem.I also appreciated your visit and comment. Have a good evening
Merryman Avatar
February 1, 2013 at 10:07 AM
A profoundly beautiful write, Carl! Great work! Love, Kim
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February 1, 2013 at 6:51 AM
Carl, it's just gorgeous! - Deep and beautiful! - Have a nice weekend, do something fun. - or just relax. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)
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