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Transformation

It came, piercing the bright air above the garden with a sudden presence, the first dragonfly of the season. It darted and hovered over me, glistening in a spellbinding grid of movement. What was weighted down and stuck in the sludge of a long winter reached after its fleeting shadow. Shackled forms hiding in the weedy depths looked upwards towards a transformation. Somewhere near, fragile wings began to unfold in the shape of a prayer.

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Date: 9/7/2023 6:21:00 AM
Wasn't expecting that last line but I like it Paul. My wife loves dragonflies
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Paul Willason
Date: 9/16/2023 9:22:00 PM
Thanks Tom for yr comments....always good to incorporate the unexpected when possible. Value yr feedback.
Date: 9/7/2023 6:16:00 AM
I need to get myself synced with your seasons to appreciate this fully as it's the end of Summer here. Despite that I can still appreciate the beauty of your words and observations - which always brighten my day :)
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Paul Willason
Date: 9/16/2023 9:26:00 PM
The seasonal mismatch plays with the mind a bit...but I think a warm Christmas with beach weather is still preferable. Thanks DD for your comnents.

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