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TRANSFORMATION - a weird Choka

TRANSFORMATION – a weird Choka Our dear Uncle Claude He loved us kids we loved him He always brought us candy Called him Santa Claude Strange thing though this steady change Now he’s called Aunt Claudia ............................................................ This is not a true story

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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Date: 8/9/2013 5:11:00 PM
Loving this one again!!! Hope you are having a good day and that your eyes feel ok.
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Date: 6/7/2011 3:11:00 PM
A weird transformation, no doubt Daver!! You come up with the wildest stuff..LOL A master of diversity...your writes are never hum drum.;) Best to you and yours, Love, Mikki
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Date: 2/12/2011 10:51:00 AM
coming back here-- really enjoyed reading this again, Dave :) & thank you for your comments-- that was a pretty cool how your dream told you what would happen with your friendship-- amazing dreams, really :) and yup old letters are such treasures :D enjoy your Sunday :)
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Date: 1/27/2011 5:09:00 PM
Got a chuckle...Sara
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Date: 1/27/2011 8:40:00 AM
Very, very funny, Daver. Love the poem and love you too, Carolyn
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Date: 1/26/2011 3:42:00 PM
thankxx Dave for your wonderful uplifting comments on my contest entry.. much appreciated my friend..with luv..
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Date: 1/26/2011 3:36:00 PM
Yes, the only ones I like who soar are the ones with "beautiful" wings, not those greedy ones that keep trying to get ahead or like that guy who invented FaceBook. Did you see Social Network, the movie about him ? He is super obnoxious. So definitely my poem was not about THAT brand of over acheivers. Let me go find a poem of yours I've not read yet. LUv, Andrea
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Date: 1/25/2011 10:25:00 PM
daver, it would be even funner if this actually was a true story. hahaha. Loved it! Luv, Andrea
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Date: 1/25/2011 5:42:00 PM
funny weird choka---lol
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Date: 1/25/2011 4:26:00 PM
haha.. my funny bone is hurting from laughing so Dave.. but very well written and the punch line saved for last luv... enjoyed ..and Infused by your man..meaning the man my hubby is.. making me a happy woman... Andrea also asked me about whose man? haha.. great minds and all that jazz luv..haha..
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Date: 1/25/2011 10:57:00 AM
omy....love that last line!!! yep.....adapting to some changes can be more difficult than others!! LOL !!
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Date: 1/25/2011 10:00:00 AM
hahahaha -- wow that last line just made me laugh aloud! wasn't expecting that ;) enjoyed this choka of yours :) ---nikko :)
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