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Transcendental Trauma

Their elan and their eclat only made my ennui bloom It made me long, made me yearn for the womb or tomb When given carte blanche by the dilettante masses I found my creative spirit to be lacking true passions I pined to be a paradoxical paragon, a peculiar paradigm, An anomaly in the cacophony, not a soldier in peacetime I had a feeling of deja vu while they bantered and prattled In the baroque anteroom I was illuminated yet addled To be avant-garde, nay, prototypical, I must make them look inside To see the truth, to eschew the ersatz, to embrace what's bona fide

Copyright © | Year Posted 2018




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Date: 1/31/2018 12:38:00 PM
Excellent Trey! Congratulations on your win! : )
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Trey Hamner
Date: 2/1/2018 4:46:00 PM
Thank you very much Connie. ;)
Date: 1/30/2018 11:54:00 PM
Congrats on your win, Trey. Well done.
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Trey Hamner
Date: 2/1/2018 4:45:00 PM
Thank you Line. :)
Date: 1/30/2018 10:12:00 PM
This is a treat to read! Fantastic. Congratulations on your win! xomo
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Trey Hamner
Date: 2/1/2018 4:45:00 PM
I appreciate it Maureen.
Date: 1/30/2018 8:05:00 PM
Congrats, Trey!
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Trey Hamner
Date: 2/1/2018 4:45:00 PM
Thank you Kim!
Date: 1/30/2018 1:16:00 AM
Complex, and a fine rythmn to it, too. Well done, Trey! Regards, Viv
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Trey Hamner
Date: 1/30/2018 6:28:00 AM
Thanks Viv, I appreciate it.
Date: 1/29/2018 9:27:00 PM
A compelling and intriguing poem with great use of the ten words Trey. Congratulations on your wonderful win with your excellent poem. ~Susan
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Trey Hamner
Date: 1/30/2018 6:28:00 AM
Thank you so much, Susan. :)
Date: 1/29/2018 1:58:00 PM
Great use of ten words Trey.. Congratulations on your placement in the contest
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Trey Hamner
Date: 1/30/2018 6:27:00 AM
Thank you, I really enjoy the contests!
Date: 1/17/2018 7:34:00 AM
Nicely done! Especially enjoyed the final lines! GL in contest, Trey!
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Trey Hamner
Date: 1/26/2018 8:31:00 AM
Thank you very much Kim!
Date: 1/16/2018 7:14:00 AM
excellent use of all ten words, good luck! ;)-luloo
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Trey Hamner
Date: 1/16/2018 9:21:00 AM
Thank you Laura. :)

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