Richard Lamoureux Poet Pantoum

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Transcendent

Transcendent Beauty

I waited for her for so many years
She lived within my imagination
When I first saw her I was breathless
She was beyond any expectation

She lived within my imagination
Until the day she stepped into my life
She was beyond any expectation
I've come to realize dreams do come true

Until the day she stepped into my life
There were so many doubts within my mind
I've come to learn that dreams do come true
Dreams sometimes happen when we are awake

There were so many doubts within my mind
I was unsure of how to live this life
Dreams sometimes happen when we are awake
My life began with her angelic smile

I was unsure of how to live this life
Somehow it seemed like living in a fog
My life began with her angelic smile
Eternity dwells with in her beauty

Somehow it seemed like living in a fog
When I first saw her I was breathless
Eternity dwells within her beauty
I waited for her for so many years

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Connie Marcum Wong March 14, 2014 at 7:59 PM What a true romantic you are Richard. This is very beautiful! Richard Lamoureux March 15, 2014 at 3:56 PM Thanks Connie you are kind.

Monterey Sirak March 14, 2014 at 7:47 AM Such lovely romantic poetry for your wife. Your love for her leaps from the page. Richard Lamoureux March 14, 2014 at 8:49 AM She has caused my heart to jump for 22years.

Honestly J.T. March 13, 2014 at 7:11 PM Awesome poem you have here Honestly J.T. March 14, 2014 at 11:41 AM JT Richard Lamoureux March 14, 2014 at 8:50 AM Thanks Honestly, can I call you Honesty for short?

Poet Destroyer A March 13, 2014 at 1:06 AM wonderful poem Richard, the poem gave its self eternal beauty. Very touching... Linda Richard Lamoureux March 13, 2014 at 7:38 AM Hi Linda, I am happy to see you are back. Thanks for the thoughtful comment.

Russell Sivey March 12, 2014 at 11:45 PM This is surely a terrific Pantoum, you have come a long way from your first attempt of this form! This is a very awesome write my friend! You have created a romantic poem deep within this poem! I really enjoyed reading this delightful piece this evening! What a lovely poem, Great work!! Richard Lamoureux March 13, 2014 at 7:37 AM What a nice thing to say Russel, I appreciate it.

Charmaine Chircop March 12, 2014 at 4:52 PM Eternity dwells within her beauty-What an awesome verse../Dreams sometimes happen when We are awake,Thiose waking dreams are the best in my opinion./So many beautiful verses..guving me a feeling of fluttering wings upon your shoulder. Charmaine Chircop March 13, 2014 at 9:32 AM Good morning to you too Richard : ) Richard Lamoureux March 12, 2014 at 4:54 PM Wow! It is so cool being quoted! Thanks Charmaine.

Eileen Manassian March 12, 2014 at 4:43 PM Awwwww....full and sweet...quite a treat...it can't be beat! Ok...that was cheesy, but this is a lovely poem! :) Angelic smiles will do that to someone! Eileen Manassian March 12, 2014 at 4:47 PM What sweet thing to say.......Thanks, Richard. Richard Lamoureux March 12, 2014 at 4:44 PM I am sure you have broken a few hearts with your angelic smile.

Ken Carroll March 12, 2014 at 4:27 PM Nicely penned Richard! Richard Lamoureux March 12, 2014 at 4:29 PM Thanks Ken Richard Lamoureux March 12, 2014 at 4:28 PM Thanks Shadow, sorry you are getting so many messages. Each time I tried to post for Eileen it posted to yours. Thanks for commenting Shadow. Hugs Rick

Eileen Manassian March 12, 2014 at 4:19 PM OH WOW!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Isn't this a beauty! Your sweetie will love it. Hmmmmmm....it doesn't get much better than to have someone write poetry about you. She's a lucky lady. Great write, Richard....as always....

Shadow Hamilton March 12, 2014 at 4:19 PM full of feelings and very romantic write Rick hugs Richard Lamoureux March 12, 2014 at 4:30 PM Hi Eileen, see message to you below. Richard Lamoureux March 12, 2014 at 4:27 PM The soup is doing weird things, the above message was for you Eileen. Richard Lamoureux March 12, 2014 at 4:26 PM Hi Eileen, Thanks for the positive comment. have another look I am now finished writing it. Hugs Rick