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Transcendence

The distant mountain is ablaze
Sun    rain    clouds blend majesty

From my perch on the lookout hill
All land between is ocean

Clouds    like white waves    obscure the Earth
I bathe in that transcendence

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Lily Twinkle

May 6, 2014 at 10:54 AM

Beautifully crafted imagery... an enjoyable read.

Daver Austin

May 6, 2014 at 11:11 AM

Thanks Lily. Love, daver

Poet Destroyer A

May 13, 2011 at 7:08 PM

Daver.. congratulations on your wonderful feature of the week... I sure enjoyed... take care,..p.d

Barbara Gorelick

May 9, 2011 at 4:35 PM

A lovely picture..well done Dave-r..congrats on being featured. BG

Carol Sunshine Brown

May 9, 2011 at 8:42 AM

Congratulations on your well deserved poetry being featured this week Daver. Love, Carol

Dr.Ram Mehta

May 9, 2011 at 4:20 AM

Congratulations on your poem being featured this week, daver

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

May 8, 2011 at 5:34 PM

Congrats Daver on your featured poem this week on P.S. ..a super great write to share with us all my friend with luv...

Andrea Dietrich

May 25, 2010 at 1:46 PM

this is awesome, a FAV!! (and yes, I often hunger just to eat good food I think you and I both love food too much!)

Kristin Reynolds

October 22, 2008 at 12:21 PM

of succeeding at the dementional shift that is coming...things about to transpire have been known by all ancient men/religions/tribes for thoughsands of yrs, and it is due again to occur come 2012. anyway...hope this makes sense! Take care, Kristin

Kristin Reynolds

October 22, 2008 at 12:19 PM

Hey Mr. Daver! This seemed like a good title from which to try to explain Beneath God's Mt. Well, have you ever read any Z. Sitchin? It is mostly based on his studies, and the studies of the God's/2012 from the perspective of all major religions of today and yesterday coming to the same conclusions...how this universe and all universes/planets/beings are watching us and waiting to see what happens/what the colective consciousness of here will end up as...if we are capable od succeeding...

August 13, 2008 at 1:53 PM

Nice use of imagery in this short format. The creative spacing adds visual interest and gives the reader a bit of a pause. Interesting reflection. Karen

James Foulk

August 13, 2008 at 12:43 PM

You painted a perfect picture of what you wrote. A very refreshing piece of poetry.

Vince Suzadail Jr.

August 13, 2008 at 7:30 AM

Sounds like a breathtaking place to be. Vince

Heidie Buys

August 12, 2008 at 4:53 PM

Such a vivid and beautiful mental picture this evokes. Well done. Regards Heidie

P Sheart

August 12, 2008 at 2:15 PM

This takes my spirit away to a place I already am in my knowing. You bring it to life with such beautiful poetic vision, that I just want to sit appreciate it for awhile. Thanks for sharing hun. Blessings to you and yours. Take care Love Light Truth Patricia

Sharon Winter

August 12, 2008 at 1:42 PM

Visually awe-inspiring. I would love to be there. Glorious. Love, Shar

Kristin Reynolds

August 12, 2008 at 9:05 AM

Gorgeous, Daver! Wow, so clear and awesome - magestic write from the soul - awesome, love Kristin

Michael Degenhardt

August 12, 2008 at 8:42 AM

These words paint pictures, provide imagery that we as the readers can become a part of. What an effect! Terrific flow and just an awesome read. Michael

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