Victor Buhagiar Poet Tetractys

Tranquillity

Burst
Of sweet
Rivulet, 
Bubbling towards
The water-mill, its wheel turns endlessly,
Churning a mellow constant melody
As I enjoy
The deep peace
Of red
Dawn.

25 September 2020

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Double Tetractys 3 Poetry Contest
Sponsored by: Eve Roper

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Angela Crabtree October 11, 2020 at 4:59 PM I love this poem on tranquility, Victor. :) ~Angie

Sara Kendrick October 7, 2020 at 2:29 PM Congrats on your winning work. Way to go. Sara..I appreciate you dropping by and reading my work.

Susan Ashley October 3, 2020 at 9:53 PM Victor, the feeling of your poem’s imagery is just beautiful. Congratulations on your wonderful win. Warmest wishes.. ~Susan

Eve Roper October 2, 2020 at 2:54 PM Thank you for participating in the Double Tetractys 3 contest,Victor . I love the theme in your, "Tranquility “, it has great imagery, and flow. Congratulations on your win! Hugs Eve"

Anne-Lise Andresen October 2, 2020 at 7:36 AM - Congratulations on your first place in the contest, Victor :) - Have a wonderful weekend :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Jenna Logan October 2, 2020 at 7:07 AM Congratulations on your winning Tetrachtys, Victor.

Linda Alice Fowler October 2, 2020 at 5:53 AM Love the "...deep peace of red dawn." Congratulations on the win Victor! Linda

Joanna Daniel October 1, 2020 at 12:17 AM Brilliant and peaceful, Victor:)

Angela Crabtree September 27, 2020 at 2:14 PM Very nice writing, Victor. A very hypnotizing moment. Angie

Mystic Rose Rose September 27, 2020 at 11:33 AM Ah, you own a peaceful heart that is made for poetry alone. Thanks for sharing Victor, Keep well.

Andrea Dietrich September 27, 2020 at 10:11 AM Fantastic , Victor . I was just returning comments and saw you at one of the places I was visiting. So NICE to see you back. I missed you. I hope you saved your poems to put them back up eventually???

Tom Cunningham September 27, 2020 at 1:26 AM Nothing more peaceful than listening to the sounds of a water mill, the water gurgling below A few pubs over here are old water Mills and many have them going, so relaxing. Tom

Kim Rodrigues September 26, 2020 at 5:27 AM So beautiful! You’ve captured the lovely imagery of tranquility!

Evelyn Judy Buehler September 25, 2020 at 9:46 PM Bravo! An enchanting poem, Victor. Also a FAVE. Best of wishes for the contest. Victor Buhagiar September 25, 2020 at 10:21 PM Thanks.

Nette Onclaud September 25, 2020 at 5:49 PM wow victor... your poem is ablaze!...eloquent!...huggs

Anne-Lise Andresen September 25, 2020 at 7:21 AM - A beautiful picture, Victor :) - Best wishes in the contest ... a winning poem :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

John Lawless September 25, 2020 at 5:54 AM You paint a vivid picture her Victor. Made me sit back and take a deep breath and reflect....thanks for the moment..

Vijay Pandit September 25, 2020 at 4:58 AM Skillfully rendered as always, Victor. You paint a dynamic picture through your words.

Jan Allison September 25, 2020 at 3:33 AM What a peaceful picture you paint:-) Hugs Jan xx

Harry Horsman September 25, 2020 at 2:37 AM You capture the serenity so well Victor, love this...