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Tranquillity

Burst Of sweet Rivulet, Bubbling towards The water-mill, its wheel turns endlessly, Churning a mellow constant melody As I enjoy The deep peace Of red Dawn. 25 September 2020 Placed 1 Picture 1 Double Tetractys 3 Poetry Contest Sponsored by: Eve Roper

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Angela Crabtree

Date: 10/11/2020 4:59:00 PM

I love this poem on tranquility, Victor. :) ~Angie

Sara Kendrick

Date: 10/7/2020 2:29:00 PM

Congrats on your winning work. Way to go. Sara..I appreciate you dropping by and reading my work.

Susan Ashley

Date: 10/3/2020 9:53:00 PM

Victor, the feeling of your poem’s imagery is just beautiful. Congratulations on your wonderful win. Warmest wishes.. ~Susan

Eve Roper

Date: 10/2/2020 2:54:00 PM

Thank you for participating in the Double Tetractys 3 contest,Victor . I love the theme in your, "Tranquility “, it has great imagery, and flow. Congratulations on your win! Hugs Eve"

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 10/2/2020 7:36:00 AM

- Congratulations on your first place in the contest, Victor :) - Have a wonderful weekend :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Jenna Logan

Date: 10/2/2020 7:07:00 AM

Congratulations on your winning Tetrachtys, Victor.

Linda Alice Fowler

Date: 10/2/2020 5:53:00 AM

Love the "...deep peace of red dawn." Congratulations on the win Victor! Linda

Joanna Daniel

Date: 10/1/2020 12:17:00 AM

Brilliant and peaceful, Victor:)

Angela Crabtree

Date: 9/27/2020 2:14:00 PM

Very nice writing, Victor. A very hypnotizing moment. Angie

Mystic Rose Rose

Date: 9/27/2020 11:33:00 AM

Ah, you own a peaceful heart that is made for poetry alone. Thanks for sharing Victor, Keep well.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 9/27/2020 10:11:00 AM

Fantastic , Victor . I was just returning comments and saw you at one of the places I was visiting. So NICE to see you back. I missed you. I hope you saved your poems to put them back up eventually???

Tom Cunningham

Date: 9/27/2020 1:26:00 AM

Nothing more peaceful than listening to the sounds of a water mill, the water gurgling below A few pubs over here are old water Mills and many have them going, so relaxing. Tom