Tranquility

Oh little one, how soon you'll be
In turbulence of puberty.
I will hold tight your days of youth 
And share with you my honest truth 

That innocence ingrained at birth,
Precious childhood days filled with mirth,
Will be so fleeting... you will see
The need for God's tranquility.

How grandma's age is redefined
When your teen years become aligned
With thoughts of struggles, I go through,
The many shades in every hue,

That colors life for me today.
In these sweet days, I watch you play
As I instill the grains of hope,
An inner strength to help you cope

With all the changes life will bring.
The ups and downs from early spring
Throughout your life in winter years
When you, like me, through joys and tears

Have lived a life you feel has worth;
Have given back to better earth.
When you have children of your own
And you too, see how they have grown,

My hope is that you let them know
That through their life where e'er they go
They carry with them bits of me,
Please share with them, tranquility.

The teenage years and the golden years are 
the most difficult to endure. Both are fraught 
with emotions...of facing life...of facing death.

May 9, 2017

~Poem of the Day May 11, 2017~
Copyright © | Year Posted 2017

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Ekwobi Avatar
September 16, 2022 at 9:07 AM
Marcum Wong in Tranquility drops the sober voice of a a female sage and what a grandma is bound to tell her grandchild: Invariably The Peace Message.
Morris Avatar
September 14, 2022 at 11:23 AM
I love this poem. If only they would listen.
Walker Avatar
June 16, 2022 at 7:01 AM
Oh, my Gosh! Love it! If we could really impart words of value to them. I think our best, and maybe only teaching comes through our example to them. Great Work Connie
Maverick Avatar
November 1, 2021 at 12:41 PM
Such a lot of thought and reflection in this Connie with a strong element of reaching Out yet not teaching overtly..' Really fitting read, in light of the soup mail I Sent you earlier'
George   Avatar
November 23, 2020 at 2:12 AM
A true MASTERPIECE, dear Connie. This one goes to my fav's. ~ Elaine
Marcum Wong Avatar
November 23, 2020 at 8:25 PM
Thank you so very much for honoring this poem with a Fave Elaine. I can already see some changes in my granddaughter who is eight and a half. They grow up so fast. Contd.
Marcum Wong Avatar
November 23, 2020 at 8:25 PM
I have a nine month old granddaughter who lives across the ocean and have only seen her once right after I lost my husband. Now the airlines will be forcing passengers to get the vaccine to fly so I won't get to see her again as we won't get the vaccine. I am blessed to have my youngest daughter and granddaughter living with me know. We are home schooling her. Blessings xxoo
Kaufman Avatar
November 1, 2020 at 7:35 AM
Oh Connie..so touching and beautiful..thank you..
Crenshaw Avatar
June 16, 2020 at 3:34 AM
I am tranquil now since I read that beautiful poem! Thank you.
Gutmacher Avatar
May 29, 2020 at 6:02 PM
Hey, Connie: it's been awhile since I've read another's poem -- but this one is really really great. Loved it. jon
De Beaulieu Avatar
December 30, 2019 at 1:08 PM
Hello Connie, children grow up. you will have lots of memories of your little one. Have a nice day my friend.
Callus Avatar
April 28, 2019 at 3:23 PM
I had forgotten how really beautiful this poem is, Connie! Reading it again is a double pleasure. Congratulations on your very merited win. a fav ~ Regards // paul
Marcum Wong Avatar
April 28, 2019 at 4:10 PM
Oh thank you so much Paul. My daughter and family are moving an hour's flight away to the Big Island so I will not get to see my sweet little granddaughters very much at all after this June. They mean everything to me. I know how much you love yours. Hugs, Connie xxoo
Haight Avatar
April 27, 2019 at 6:06 PM
Connie, I am so pleased to see and read this lovely poem, one of my faves, again! My heartfelt congratulations on another win! Hugs, Sandra
Marcum Wong Avatar
April 28, 2019 at 6:07 AM
Thank you Sandra. I remember how fast my youngest daughter grew up and I know I will blink and my grandchildren will be in their teens. It hit me oneday which is what inspired this poem. I appreciate your lovely comment. xxoo
Capitano Avatar
April 26, 2019 at 7:05 AM
Another triumph for this wonderful POTD, Connie, full of insight and character. Well done.
Marcum Wong Avatar
April 26, 2019 at 2:01 PM
Thank you Phil. So nice to hear from you. xxoo
Lamoureux Avatar
April 26, 2019 at 12:13 AM
You are welcome Connie. You are a bright light here at the soup.
Lamoureux Avatar
April 25, 2019 at 9:25 AM
Congrats on your win, thanks for entering my contest. I so enjoyed reading this one again.
Marcum Wong Avatar
April 25, 2019 at 11:08 PM
Thank you very much Richard. So many can relate to growing older and how things change. I am happy to be on your winner's list Richard. xxoo
Breedt Avatar
February 19, 2019 at 4:34 AM
Connie, you heart is like a saints, I know. Thanks for being my friend and congratulations for getting your poem on the best ever list. Just a brief stopover from me. Think of you all the time Love Jannie
Staton Avatar
February 2, 2019 at 4:03 AM
Beautifully written. My oldest grand is 10. In a few years this would be something I'd share with her. Words of wisdom.
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September 23, 2018 at 9:25 PM
This is so true. Our little ones grow up so fast. Then before you know it they are having children of their own. While we are dealing with our parents ailments and our own. This was very well written. Congratulations on your win.
Coulstock Avatar
September 1, 2018 at 7:51 AM
This is really beautiful,truth and understanding ingrained with spirituality. A lovely read. I would like it for a favourite. Thank you. Kind thoughts.June
Marcum Wong Avatar
September 1, 2018 at 11:28 PM
This poem I have found many relate to, as it is my top poem here at Poetry Soup. Thank you for being so kind as to fave it. I appreciate your comment very much June. Blessings and Aloha, Connie : )
Coulstock Avatar
August 29, 2018 at 4:45 PM
This is beautiful Connie.Spiritually uplifting and so full of wisdom. A joy to read.
Kroll Avatar
July 5, 2018 at 9:58 AM
There is so much truth and insight here. My grands are entering their teens and I will reread when I need a reminder of the important role a grandparent plays. Thanks!
Dietrich Avatar
June 21, 2018 at 7:48 PM
This gem has become your SECOND best according to Soup! The Island poem remains FIRST!
Marcum Wong Avatar
June 22, 2018 at 1:44 AM
Actually they just left it that way Andrea. But Tranquility has way more faves and is my best faved poem. I wrote it for Carissa. : )
Pigeon Tart Avatar
October 29, 2017 at 8:25 AM
Where was I? I missed this one. A truly wonderful pen, a legacy in the making. Congratulations on it's well deserved recognition, and thank you for leading me to it :) <3 xomo
Singh Avatar
August 2, 2017 at 6:19 AM
Congrats on this inspiring piece of work, Connie!
Marcum Wong Avatar
August 4, 2017 at 2:59 AM
Thank you very much Sushma. I wrote this for my grandchildren boy 7 and girl 5. : )
Dietrich Avatar
August 1, 2017 at 6:13 PM
wow, i am so pleased for you, Connie. You topped it over many others in this contest. And it's a well deserved win. It was one of my favorites of yours from the year. BIG congrats
Marcum Wong Avatar
August 1, 2017 at 8:23 PM
Thank you so much Andrea. I was blown away and thrilled at my second placement. I don't have any first trophy wins like you do, so this means a lot. One day I will get that first trophy win. There are so many great poets here that it may take a long time. : )
Smith Avatar
August 1, 2017 at 1:12 PM
Wonderful to read again Ms. Connie, congratulations again...
Marcum Wong Avatar
August 1, 2017 at 3:46 PM
Thank you so much Charlie I was blown away to see that this took second place! It was written for my grandchildren. : )
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