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Tranquility

T-roubles melt away in this
R-emote place.
A-vidly my eyes take in the beauty,
N-othing but the waves can be heard
Q-uietly rippling to the shore.
U-ndisturbed I sit and
I-ndulge my senses,
L-ong slow breaths,
I-n and out.
T-ogether mind and soul
Y-ielding into peace.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2017




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Date: 3/29/2017 12:14:00 AM
You are so good at this Acrostic format Elizabeth, and as for the poem itself you've captured the ocean in its tranquil state beautifully. A well deserved 7
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Elizabeth Kinch
Date: 3/29/2017 1:33:00 AM
Thank you Maria.
Date: 3/28/2017 4:59:00 PM
Hello Elizabeth. I love the ocean and before turning the page I didn't know it would be about her. You have captured her essence wonderfully. I love this. Also excellent work the the Acrostic format. It is hard to make flow but you executed that aspect with skill. Well done entirely.
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Date: 3/29/2017 1:36:00 AM
Thank you for your kind comment Lisa
Date: 3/28/2017 4:57:00 PM
This was beautifully soothing and comforting Elizabeth not to mention a wonderfully crafted acrostic poem. Very nicely done my friend.
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Elizabeth Kinch
Date: 3/29/2017 1:35:00 AM
Thank you so much Chris.
Date: 3/28/2017 4:40:00 PM
WoW! Beautifully done Elizabeth. It isn't easy to produce an Acrostic that flows this well. Beautiful imagery. There is a restful feel to this piece. Nicely done. God Bless and a big 7 from me. JB
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Elizabeth Kinch
Date: 3/29/2017 1:34:00 AM
Thank you for your kind comment.
Date: 3/28/2017 11:34:00 AM
This is good for meditation dear, Elizabeth for it inspires tranquility! A 7.
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Elizabeth Kinch
Date: 3/28/2017 12:14:00 PM
Thank you Demetrios for your comment and a seven.
Date: 3/28/2017 9:55:00 AM
Enviable peace ... We can feel ... Wonderful 'tranquility' ...
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Elizabeth Kinch
Date: 3/28/2017 12:13:00 PM
Thank you Probir.
Date: 3/28/2017 8:12:00 AM
Elizabeth, this is marvelously done. Your poem makes us breathe 'Tranquility' in and out. A serene 7:) Amitiés
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Elizabeth Kinch
Date: 3/28/2017 12:13:00 PM
Thank you so much Anne-Marie.
Date: 3/28/2017 2:30:00 AM
A most delightful Acrostic poem, clever written and lovely to read...well done Elizabeth.
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Elizabeth Kinch
Date: 3/28/2017 12:07:00 PM
Thank you so much, I was inspired by a beautiful picture.