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Tranquility

T-roubles melt away in this
R-emote place.
A-vidly my eyes take in the beauty,
N-othing but the waves can be heard
Q-uietly rippling to the shore.
U-ndisturbed I sit and
I-ndulge my senses,
L-ong slow breaths,
I-n and out.
T-ogether mind and soul
Y-ielding into peace.

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Maria Williams

Date: 3/29/2017 12:14:00 AM

You are so good at this Acrostic format Elizabeth, and as for the poem itself you've captured the ocean in its tranquil state beautifully. A well deserved 7

Elizabeth Kinch
Date: 3/29/2017 1:33:00 AM

Thank you Maria.

Lisa Ricci

Date: 3/28/2017 4:59:00 PM

Hello Elizabeth. I love the ocean and before turning the page I didn't know it would be about her. You have captured her essence wonderfully. I love this. Also excellent work the the Acrostic format. It is hard to make flow but you executed that aspect with skill. Well done entirely.

Elizabeth Kinch
Date: 3/29/2017 1:36:00 AM

Thank you for your kind comment Lisa

Chris Green

Date: 3/28/2017 4:57:00 PM

This was beautifully soothing and comforting Elizabeth not to mention a wonderfully crafted acrostic poem. Very nicely done my friend.

Elizabeth Kinch
Date: 3/29/2017 1:35:00 AM

Thank you so much Chris.

Judy Ball

Date: 3/28/2017 4:40:00 PM

WoW! Beautifully done Elizabeth. It isn't easy to produce an Acrostic that flows this well. Beautiful imagery. There is a restful feel to this piece. Nicely done. God Bless and a big 7 from me. JB

Elizabeth Kinch
Date: 3/29/2017 1:34:00 AM

Thank you for your kind comment.