Elizabeth Kinch Poet Acrostic

Tranquility

T-roubles melt away in this
R-emote place.
A-vidly my eyes take in the beauty,
N-othing but the waves can be heard
Q-uietly rippling to the shore.
U-ndisturbed I sit and
I-ndulge my senses,
L-ong slow breaths,
I-n and out.
T-ogether mind and soul
Y-ielding into peace.

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Maria Williams March 29, 2017 at 12:14 AM You are so good at this Acrostic format Elizabeth, and as for the poem itself you've captured the ocean in its tranquil state beautifully. A well deserved 7 Elizabeth Kinch March 29, 2017 at 1:33 AM Thank you Maria.

Lisa Ricci March 28, 2017 at 4:59 PM Hello Elizabeth. I love the ocean and before turning the page I didn't know it would be about her. You have captured her essence wonderfully. I love this. Also excellent work the the Acrostic format. It is hard to make flow but you executed that aspect with skill. Well done entirely. Elizabeth Kinch March 29, 2017 at 1:36 AM Thank you for your kind comment Lisa

Chris Green March 28, 2017 at 4:57 PM This was beautifully soothing and comforting Elizabeth not to mention a wonderfully crafted acrostic poem. Very nicely done my friend. Elizabeth Kinch March 29, 2017 at 1:35 AM Thank you so much Chris.

Judy Ball March 28, 2017 at 4:40 PM WoW! Beautifully done Elizabeth. It isn't easy to produce an Acrostic that flows this well. Beautiful imagery. There is a restful feel to this piece. Nicely done. God Bless and a big 7 from me. JB Elizabeth Kinch March 29, 2017 at 1:34 AM Thank you for your kind comment.

Demetrios Trifiatis March 28, 2017 at 11:34 AM This is good for meditation dear, Elizabeth for it inspires tranquility! A 7. Elizabeth Kinch March 28, 2017 at 12:14 PM Thank you Demetrios for your comment and a seven.

Probir Gupta March 28, 2017 at 9:55 AM Enviable peace ... We can feel ... Wonderful 'tranquility' ... Elizabeth Kinch March 28, 2017 at 12:13 PM Thank you Probir.

Anne-Marie Coreggia March 28, 2017 at 8:12 AM Elizabeth, this is marvelously done. Your poem makes us breathe 'Tranquility' in and out. A serene 7:) Amitiés Elizabeth Kinch March 28, 2017 at 12:13 PM Thank you so much Anne-Marie.