Tranquility

Shall I turn back on stepping stones to yesterday- wait,while I reflect

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Krista Kurth

Date: 2/16/2010 10:10:00 AM

Wow - so much said in so few words! Good luck in Raul's contest Brian. Krista

Carrie Richards

Date: 2/16/2010 8:16:00 AM

Oh goodness! I can honestly say I wish I had written this one. Into my favorites!! :)

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 2/16/2010 7:47:00 AM

Excellent Haiku and good luck if for your contest entry in Raul's Morning Ambiance.. we all need some tranquil moments of reflection.. luv.. Linda-Marie..

Jared Pickett

Date: 2/16/2010 7:17:00 AM

This has got to be one of the best Haikus I have ever read.... Well written, A new favorite my friend..... EXCELLENT.....:JP]

Sara Kendrick

Date: 2/16/2010 4:07:00 AM

If an entry to the contest, should do well. Good luck. Keep the creative pen flowing. Thanks for stopping by and commenting on my work. I did find out that the bird is a Northern Flicker. Sara

Sean Kelly

Date: 2/16/2010 3:59:00 AM

You saw it ; you wrote it and you got it ....