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Tranquility

"It is neither wealth nor splendor; but tranquility and occupation which give you happiness". By Thomas Jefferson
A place where the zeal of my heart dwells The appeal of a simple life, as lucid tale tells, within a framework of some tranquility. Slower flow and less agony ooze credibility. A sulfurous fury emanated from the darkness. Nostrils flared with a fiery, acrid harshness Roaring voices mutilate the uttermost peace It is impossible to tango with a noxious piece. My chest heaves, and my lips unclench in a sigh. Release suffocating lighting with the word "supply." I'm blessed in my peace, and that lets me smile embroidered with power and dominance style. To admit a stroll when I could spare some time In a casual way down an uphill road, sublime, I absorb it all in whilst I walk through the forest Each idyllic scene unfolds for an hour of rest. Where I'd stay is beside an almond tree, Its gentle breeze murmurs as it hugs me where I'd quietly sit by the windowpane holding a mug while glancing at the rain. A place to catch the firefly's graceful elegance Relax amid a velvety starry sky for your dance, A little peace and quiet amid life's frenetic pace So my soul is punter attuned, full of helpful solace. Written: April 13, 2023 1st place contest winner Writing Challenge - 'T' Words - Poetry Contest Sponsored by: Constance La France
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May Avatar
April 17, 2023 at 7:25 PM
Congrats on your win Sotto
Andresen Avatar
April 17, 2023 at 11:00 AM
- Congratulations on your win in the contest, Las :) - hugs
Goldsmith Avatar
April 16, 2023 at 12:51 PM
Back with Congratulations on your New win. Way to go. Have a blessed day/week..................
Y. Avatar
April 16, 2023 at 12:51 PM
Hi Lasaad, I'm just coming back to say congratulations on a well-deserved win. Have a great day:-)Alexis
George Avatar
April 15, 2023 at 9:03 PM
Back to your beautiful poem a third time to congratulate you on your first place win.
Sambourne Avatar
April 15, 2023 at 4:16 PM
Congratulations on your top placement in the T writing challenge contest. A fine write indeed. Best wishes, Brian
La France Avatar
April 15, 2023 at 2:38 PM
Sotto, thank you for sharing your beautiful poem with us in my Writing Challenge congratulations! I like your image, music and quote !
Fernandez-Garcia Avatar
April 15, 2023 at 12:12 PM
Congratulations Sotto. Your poem is graceful elegant!. Thank you for giving us the chance to read such a nice writing.
Dietrich Avatar
April 15, 2023 at 10:48 AM
Aha. A fellow chooser of tranquility word and a POTD to boot. Way to go. Sotto big congrats to you. Loved the fireflies in this
Bueckert Avatar
April 15, 2023 at 9:37 AM
Beautiful imagery and congrats, love the last verse, very tranquil indeed
George Avatar
April 15, 2023 at 9:06 AM
Congratulations dear friend on your POTD. Enjoyed reading it a second time.
Fowler Avatar
April 15, 2023 at 8:23 AM
Back with congratulations in Constance's contest Lasaad! :)
Volumes Avatar
April 15, 2023 at 8:11 AM
Congrats on your first place. I am not at all surprised. A wonderful poem.
Congratulations on your top win in the Contest ...Sotto.
Sangster - K Avatar
April 15, 2023 at 4:59 AM
Wonderful imagery Sotto. Your calming poem took me right there :-) Congratulations on POTD. A truly lovely read for me today :-)
Rolland Avatar
April 15, 2023 at 12:05 AM
beautiful, a moment of grace, we need tranquility, more than we think, i adore yann
Chuuk Avatar
April 14, 2023 at 8:05 PM
This is so beautiful! Great poem, Sotto, and a big congrats on potd.
Lawrence Avatar
April 14, 2023 at 5:26 PM
So sweet and welcoming. I love the tone of your words . Yes some tranquility is what we all need ~ simple pleasures ~ sacred moments in time . So welcome . Big congratulations on POTD Lasaad ! Blessings, Susan :)
Ray Choudhury Avatar
April 14, 2023 at 5:24 PM
Congratulations, Dear Poet, for the honour of POTD. Your poem absolutely deserves this honour - with stunning images portraying tranquility. Best wishes ~ Mala
Nicole Avatar
April 14, 2023 at 5:10 PM
So soothing are your thoughts, like a tender moment in time. The wind whispers softly, and peace surrounds my soul. Congratulations Lasaad, on Poem of the Day. This is so beautiful and uplifting. Many wonderful blessings to you. :) Hugs, Brandy
Rone Avatar
April 14, 2023 at 2:28 PM
Lasaad, your POTD was so beyond the normal "contest piece". It must have taken hours! "Fiery, acid harshness". I get the picture for sure. Well done. Best - Ken
Goldsmith Avatar
April 14, 2023 at 1:36 PM
Congratulations on your POTD win. A wonderful write. I love this one. Have a blessed day writing away....................
Y. Avatar
April 14, 2023 at 1:18 PM
Wow! Lasaad, You have penned such a well-written poem one the chosen word. It has good content and fantastic imagery. Best wishes in the contest. Congratulations on getting the poem of the day. Have a great day and weekend:-) Alexis
Kauffman Avatar
April 14, 2023 at 11:45 AM
Lasaad, what a beautiful treasury of rich and vibrant images that create a mood serenity. This poem is so beautifully composed it is like music that flows from your poetic heart. Congratulations on your POTD my friend! best wishes for a contest win. Think I will take a cup of tea into the garden this afternoon! Blessings!
Meadows Avatar
April 14, 2023 at 10:22 AM
Congratulations on your POTD. Well done.
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