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Tranquil Water

A bridge o’er crystal clear tranquil water Mirror image Reflected Graceful Scene Sky Serene Sunlit trees Kiss the senses Nature’s wondrous double take on the lake. 28th September 2020 Double Tetractys 3 Poetry Contest Photo no. 3 Sponsored by: Eve Roper Used-How Many Syllables. * *

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Sara Kendrick

Date: 10/10/2020 3:49:00 PM

Congrats on your creative winning work. Way to go. Sara

Beryl Edmonds
Date: 10/10/2020 4:57:00 PM

Thank you Sara, most grateful. Belle

Susan Ashley

Date: 10/3/2020 9:57:00 PM

Belle, the feeling of your poem’s imagery is beautiful and I especially loved your last line - awesome! Congratulations on your wonderful win. Warmest wishes.. ~Susan

Beryl Edmonds
Date: 10/8/2020 4:40:00 PM

Thank you so much Susan, those words are truly appreciated. Belle

Eve Roper

Date: 10/2/2020 5:34:00 PM

Thank you for participating in the Double Tetractys 3 contest, Belle. I like the theme in your, " Tranquil water“, it has great imagery, Congratulations on your win! Hugs Eve"

Beryl Edmonds
Date: 10/8/2020 4:39:00 PM

Thank you Eve, I enjoyed the taking part and I’m delighted to have been placed amongst such marvellous poets. Belle

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 10/2/2020 7:43:00 AM

- Beautiful written, Belle :) - Congratulations on your second place in the contest :) - Have a wonderful weekend :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Beryl Edmonds
Date: 10/2/2020 8:26:00 AM

Thank you so much Anne-Lise, a wonderful weekend is wished for you too. Belle

Linda Alice Fowler

Date: 10/2/2020 5:54:00 AM

Wonderfully penned Belle! Congratulations on the win! Linda

Beryl Edmonds
Date: 10/2/2020 8:24:00 AM

Thank you Linda, to receive a second placement was a lovely unexpected surprise. Belle

Laura Leiser

Date: 9/28/2020 6:26:00 PM

Wow, this is a lovely tetractys poem, Belle! Best wishes for the contest! :)

Beryl Edmonds
Date: 9/29/2020 4:42:00 PM

Thanks Laura, my first tetractys poem, thanks also for your good wishes. Belle

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 9/28/2020 2:10:00 PM

I enjoyed this...My eyes drifted to the upside-down world under the tranquil lake!

Beryl Edmonds
Date: 9/29/2020 4:38:00 PM

Thank you Kim, your comments very much appreciated. Belle