Beryl Edmonds Poet Tetractys

Tranquil Water

 A bridge o’er crystal clear tranquil water
Mirror image
Reflected
Graceful 
Scene
Sky
Serene 
Sunlit trees
Kiss the senses
Nature’s wondrous double take on the lake.

28th September 2020

Double Tetractys 3 Poetry Contest
Photo no. 3
Sponsored by: Eve Roper
Used-How Many Syllables.

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CayCay Godwin June 10, 2026 at 4:05 PM Oh, I like very much, enjoyed. I hope I remember not to forget about coming back and reading more from your pen. Beryl Edmonds June 11, 2026 at 12:47 AM Thank you and bless you CayCay… Beryl

Sara Kendrick October 10, 2020 at 3:49 PM Congrats on your creative winning work. Way to go. Sara Beryl Edmonds October 10, 2020 at 4:57 PM Thank you Sara, most grateful. Beryl

Susan Ashley October 3, 2020 at 9:57 PM Belle, the feeling of your poem’s imagery is beautiful and I especially loved your last line - awesome! Congratulations on your wonderful win. Warmest wishes.. ~Susan Beryl Edmonds October 8, 2020 at 4:40 PM Thank you so much Susan, those words are truly appreciated. Belle

Eve Roper October 2, 2020 at 5:34 PM Thank you for participating in the Double Tetractys 3 contest, Belle. I like the theme in your, " Tranquil water“, it has great imagery, Congratulations on your win! Hugs Eve" Beryl Edmonds October 8, 2020 at 4:39 PM Thank you Eve, I enjoyed the taking part and I’m delighted to have been placed amongst such marvellous poets. Belle

Anne-Lise Andresen October 2, 2020 at 7:43 AM - Beautiful written, Belle :) - Congratulations on your second place in the contest :) - Have a wonderful weekend :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :) Beryl Edmonds October 2, 2020 at 8:26 AM Thank you so much Anne-Lise, a wonderful weekend is wished for you too. Belle

Linda Alice Fowler October 2, 2020 at 5:54 AM Wonderfully penned Belle! Congratulations on the win! Linda Beryl Edmonds October 2, 2020 at 8:24 AM Thank you Linda, to receive a second placement was a lovely unexpected surprise. Belle

Laura Leiser September 28, 2020 at 6:26 PM Wow, this is a lovely tetractys poem, Belle! Best wishes for the contest! :) Beryl Edmonds September 29, 2020 at 4:42 PM Thanks Laura, my first tetractys poem, thanks also for your good wishes. Belle

Kim Rodrigues September 28, 2020 at 2:10 PM I enjoyed this...My eyes drifted to the upside-down world under the tranquil lake! Beryl Edmonds September 29, 2020 at 4:38 PM Thank you Kim, your comments very much appreciated. Belle