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train station small town big dreams Submitted on May 23, 2025 for contest YOUR BEST EVER CREATIVE HAIKU sponsored by ANDREA DIETRICH: RANKED 2ND

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Howard Kerr

Date: 5/28/2025 12:16:00 AM

Congratulations Line on your triumph. Epic write in an economy of words. Howard

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 5/26/2025 8:40:00 PM

I completely forgot you wrote this. It's so different from others of yours. I really like it but you have so many amazing beautiful ones I am surprised you didn't give me one of those. Anyway this takes the prize for succinctness! Congrats in my contest.

Line Gauthier
Date: 5/26/2025 9:39:00 PM

Thanks ~ I don't know why I like this one a lot ~ probably because that little girl at the train station is me !

Maclawrence Famuyiwa

Date: 5/26/2025 7:37:00 PM

Few words. A whole story told. Congrats.

Line Gauthier
Date: 5/26/2025 9:40:00 PM

much appreciated ~ thanks

Caren Krutsinger

Date: 3/3/2021 6:59:00 AM

You know it Line. You have captured the "Hollywood" lure.

Line Gauthier
Date: 3/3/2021 11:04:00 AM

lol ~ we know there's no place like home... but dreams are important too though

Jo Chamberlain

Date: 2/28/2021 1:36:00 PM

I really loved the simplicity of your poem, with only a few words, you give a powerful message.

Line Gauthier
Date: 2/28/2021 6:53:00 PM

Thank you very much, Joanna ~

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 2/28/2021 11:00:00 AM

It's like you told an entire story in six words, Line! Fabulous poem. Hugs, Carolyn

Line Gauthier
Date: 2/28/2021 11:56:00 AM

Thank you, Carolyn ~ many of us know the story all too well

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 2/28/2021 5:05:00 AM

Very nice, Line!

Line Gauthier
Date: 2/28/2021 6:36:00 AM

thanks, Kim ~

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 2/27/2021 3:25:00 PM

You really are good with haiku, Line. Never stop! I love that I got to know you here at Soup.

Line Gauthier
Date: 2/27/2021 4:12:00 PM

Thanks for your lovely comment, Andrea. Unfortunately I started writing 'haiku' before I knew what a haiku really was so I'm making it a long term project to go through my old ones and fix them somehow as inspiration strikes... I really appreciate the encouragement. Congrats on your many successes ~