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Tragic Truth Baptised With Salt

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A warrior's death comes quickly fixed firmly upon his King's pro choice when he crosses the great divide separation from a body wheat and chaff To Honour virtues as laid upon stone correctly where his worth is weighed under moral conduct through one needle eye threading to the source against valiant deeds defending justice Corrupt chaos is born from the defeated one's idol Faceless big issue not being able to see his downfall from Grace pride creeps with envy in those whom do not accept your sin as a just cause Through your arrogance the Lord knows lusting needs comfort to be accepted as having a place at the table burning in the desert sands forgiveness is the light of sweet eternal fire quenched from the living waters of life

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Date: 8/28/2017 4:37:00 PM
Hi Liam!:))Wow! This is a very powerful, outstanding, heartfelt poem you've written here my dearest friend Liam.Very beautifully penned in all its tragedy and sadness. Prayers are very important n' powerful and we need to pray for all.Another very beautiful sparkling diamond from your very golden glowing pen.Excellent piece!Awesome!A true glowing gem!Your pen is truly mighty golden!A 7+++ ++!A Fav!Very nice to see you posting again Liam.To me you're always the best in everything Liam.So very beautiful,romantic,gentle and sweet.I really hope n' pray alot you're okay in everything.Please keep positive n' very strong.Always keeping you in my thoughts n' prayers,Liam.Keep your faith!Keep your love hopes n' follow your dreams always too:))Wishing you a very lovely week!In His light God bless you always!:))Love n' hugs!xoxox D.^O^
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Date: 8/28/2017 4:30:00 PM
Thank you...the creative imagery is soul stirring and paints the the picture of the "tragic truth."
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