Jill Spagnola Poet Etheree

Tragedy In Black

Tragedy in Black

Come,
Feel it.
Can you sense
Human unrest?
Perhaps jealousy
Creates blurred perception,
Brings unhealthy obsession~
Impairs cerebral functioning
Isolates one and carves out a void.
Trapped in shadows purple black tones avail. 






								Sunshine williams
8/27/2015

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Scott Thirtyseven September 15, 2015 at 8:56 AM Carves out a void, so nicely put. Great piece of poetry. Jill Spagnola September 26, 2015 at 12:09 AM Thank you my friend. My recent void on the soup was created by a successful 3 disc neck surgery, jill

Constance La France September 7, 2015 at 8:39 AM Jill, very deep and black, your write spoke to my weeping heart , jealousy, unrest, perception, obsession all tragic and thanks for visiting my poem, Eyes ... oh the bittersweet memories of childhood Jill Spagnola September 26, 2015 at 12:08 AM Thank you beautiful soul, xxx...

Emile Pinet September 6, 2015 at 4:30 PM The emotion and imagery are perfect. I felt the words as well as read them and they are powerful, Great Job! Jill Spagnola September 7, 2015 at 10:52 AM Thank you so much Emile, jill

Andrea Dietrich August 27, 2015 at 10:58 PM well done here! YOu did the etheree form proud! Jill Spagnola September 5, 2015 at 7:18 PM Thank you for all of your supportive replies.. :), jill XXX...

Kp Nunez August 27, 2015 at 9:56 PM Interesting hue to jealousy, Jill! That last line brings home a powerful punch for thought provoking piece. All the best in the contest. hugs! Jill Spagnola September 5, 2015 at 7:15 PM Hey, hey, hope you are more than well!!You nailed my poem, that green monster :0, jill XXX...