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Tragedy In Black

Tragedy in Black Come, Feel it. Can you sense Human unrest? Perhaps jealousy Creates blurred perception, Brings unhealthy obsession~ Impairs cerebral functioning Isolates one and carves out a void. Trapped in shadows purple black tones avail. Sunshine williams 8/27/2015

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Date: 9/15/2015 8:56:00 AM
Carves out a void, so nicely put. Great piece of poetry.
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Jill Spagnola
Date: 9/26/2015 12:09:00 AM
Thank you my friend. My recent void on the soup was created by a successful 3 disc neck surgery, jill
Date: 9/7/2015 8:39:00 AM
Jill, very deep and black, your write spoke to my weeping heart , jealousy, unrest, perception, obsession all tragic and thanks for visiting my poem, Eyes ... oh the bittersweet memories of childhood
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Jill Spagnola
Date: 9/26/2015 12:08:00 AM
Thank you beautiful soul, xxx...
Date: 9/6/2015 4:30:00 PM
The emotion and imagery are perfect. I felt the words as well as read them and they are powerful, Great Job!
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Jill Spagnola
Date: 9/7/2015 10:52:00 AM
Thank you so much Emile, jill
Date: 8/27/2015 10:58:00 PM
well done here! YOu did the etheree form proud!
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Jill Spagnola
Date: 9/5/2015 7:18:00 PM
Thank you for all of your supportive replies.. :), jill XXX...
Date: 8/27/2015 9:56:00 PM
Interesting hue to jealousy, Jill! That last line brings home a powerful punch for thought provoking piece. All the best in the contest. hugs!
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Jill Spagnola
Date: 9/5/2015 7:15:00 PM
Hey, hey, hope you are more than well!!You nailed my poem, that green monster :0, jill XXX...

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