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Traffic Life

Traffic Pass the field Then go up Then off to go Then what else Looking up above Beautiful dusk Good night.

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Darlene De Beaulieu

Date: 1/27/2025 3:53:00 PM

Hello Hugo, Ah! You are a traffic watcher. at night. I often wonder where all these cars go at night. Much love here. /Darlene/

Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 1/28/2025 11:32:00 AM

Hello Hugo, I like to watch the huge trailers trucks that carry slabs of heavy sone driving somewhere to unload. sometimes they have two huge pieces loaded. Or 4 of them loaded to a special place to be bought. I always wonder how do they unload these heavy stones . Much love here. /Darlene/

Hugo Sarvida Jr.
Date: 1/27/2025 8:28:00 PM

I like to watch light moving from a distance. Those moving cars light are like fireflies in the city. The come in closeness, then, scattered like those lights in a bonefire till you see them no more in your sight. Thank you, Darlene for a humorous reaction. Love you here./Hugo.