Traffic

we travel for hours and hours
flogging our fossil-fueled powers
when we get there
we are nowhere
as our taste for the present sours
Copyright © | Year Posted 2016

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Hauser  Avatar
November 29, 2016 at 6:55 AM
Amen to that!
Hoffman Avatar
November 27, 2016 at 8:48 PM
Sorry about the traffic jam! Cute and witty limerick John!:)
Flats Avatar
November 28, 2016 at 9:17 AM
us ameriheecans are on the move so much we oughta wear go-go boots!
Y. Avatar
November 27, 2016 at 10:13 AM
Hi John, Aint that the truth.I enjoyed this limerick. Well done:-) Alexis
Flats Avatar
November 28, 2016 at 9:16 AM
Thanks kiddo!
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