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In the hazy air, the camera drone  followed the stagnant river of traffic, telegraphing images to control. The thermals from the searing hot pavement fighting with the machine’s languid progress following a braising stream of escapees from the oppressive summer city heat; now, slowly cooking in their own tin cans.

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Date: 4/19/2024 9:31:00 AM
Your poem drips with imagery Terry. I can feel the very heat you write of. Humans in cars appear conditioned to act like sheep. :) Cheers - Gary
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Terry Miller
Date: 4/20/2024 7:31:00 AM
Thank you Gary

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