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high garden traffic black butterfly chased away.... hummer loves nectar

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Date: 9/4/2022 3:47:00 PM

Hello Saran I love your view of a garden highway + a bit of a gridlock when winged creatures seek nectar simultaneously. Sincerest regards, Brian

Sara Kendrick
Date: 9/4/2022 3:57:00 PM

Why, thank you, Brian. It is amazing how sometimes they will be sharing the same flower. Sara

Date: 7/17/2022 6:03:00 PM

I was wondering who had 'right-of-way' there in the garden... I think it was a case of 'might makes right!' ~ Hummmer

Sara Kendrick
Date: 9/4/2022 3:54:00 PM

Yes, Gershon. Might makes it right. Your comments add a different dimension to my page. Sara

Date: 7/17/2022 7:46:00 AM

Sara, you conveyed expertly the picture ' i can see the bird chasing a butterfly over the nectar. Very well crafted. Blessings

Sara Kendrick
Date: 7/17/2022 10:28:00 AM

It is amazing how tough those tiny hummers are. I need all the blessings I can get. Sara