William Kelii Kekaula Poet Haiku

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Traded Treats

*Image of Bountiful by Pixabay.

traded treats [REVISED]


corn pops prism
peach drops grapes claim
chilled lychees


2021 November 18
*4th Place*
Fall or Winter Holiday Haiku
~~Tania Kitchin: Judged 2021 November 26
*HMS

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Sam Kauffman November 30, 2021 at 2:20 PM Simply yummy William. I love your title. Autumn indeed leaves of delicious and delightful legacy! Think I will go find lunch! Congrats dear friend! Blessings! Aloha! William Kelii Kekaula November 30, 2021 at 3:10 PM 'Tis a Hawaiian day/s of fasting, Sam, with both clouds and sun teasing be it rain or shine kinda day. Ne'ertheless, doc's visit yesterday was quite persuasive, "Only 2 lbs loss in 30 days!" What's up with that! Lol, thanks a bunch my friend, Aloha!

Eve Roper November 29, 2021 at 6:21 PM William, perfect Haiku with great imagery. Congratulations on your win in Tania's contest. Hugs and lots of love Eve William Kelii Kekaula November 29, 2021 at 6:47 PM My eyes embrace your blessed words, Eve, and my compliments to you as well my friend! You're a Godsend, Aloha!

Andrea Dietrich November 28, 2021 at 7:15 PM yummy food imagery, William. Hi there. I am back from my vaycay and enjoying haiku like yours here. Congrats. William Kelii Kekaula November 28, 2021 at 7:46 PM Thank you and to you as well, Andrea, hoping that your paradise was as warm and welcoming as your own home, Aloha!

Sara Kendrick November 28, 2021 at 8:17 AM I have read your winning work and was delighted that it was in the winners' list. Congrats. Sara William Kelii Kekaula November 28, 2021 at 10:04 AM Thanks aplenty, Sara, and to you as well for your Ku, measure for measure my friend, Aloha!

Karen Jones November 26, 2021 at 9:52 PM Congrats on your win! William Kelii Kekaula November 27, 2021 at 7:43 AM Thanks, Karen, 'twas kind of you, Aloha

Tania Kitchin November 26, 2021 at 12:46 PM William, lovely autumn imagery, congratulations on your winning placement! William Kelii Kekaula November 27, 2021 at 7:42 AM Thanks, 'twas fun, Aloha

Christuraj Alex November 18, 2021 at 1:15 AM Great, indeed! You have a rich and right vocabulary! William Kelii Kekaula November 18, 2021 at 1:36 AM Phew! Expedience affects expressive efficiency, Christuraj, thank you, Aloha!