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Traded Treats

*Image of Bountiful by Pixabay.

traded treats [REVISED]


corn pops prism
peach drops grapes claim
chilled lychees


2021 November 18
*4th Place*
Fall or Winter Holiday Haiku
~~Tania Kitchin: Judged 2021 November 26
*HMS

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Sam Kauffman Date: 11/30/2021 2:20:00 PM Simply yummy William. I love your title. Autumn indeed leaves of delicious and delightful legacy! Think I will go find lunch! Congrats dear friend! Blessings! Aloha! Login to Reply Hilo Poet Date: 11/30/2021 3:10:00 PM 'Tis a Hawaiian day/s of fasting, Sam, with both clouds and sun teasing be it rain or shine kinda day. Ne'ertheless, doc's visit yesterday was quite persuasive, "Only 2 lbs loss in 30 days!" What's up with that! Lol, thanks a bunch my friend, Aloha!

Eve Roper Date: 11/29/2021 6:21:00 PM William, perfect Haiku with great imagery. Congratulations on your win in Tania's contest. Hugs and lots of love Eve Login to Reply Hilo Poet Date: 11/29/2021 6:47:00 PM My eyes embrace your blessed words, Eve, and my compliments to you as well my friend! You're a Godsend, Aloha!

Andrea Dietrich Date: 11/28/2021 7:15:00 PM yummy food imagery, William. Hi there. I am back from my vaycay and enjoying haiku like yours here. Congrats. Login to Reply Hilo Poet Date: 11/28/2021 7:46:00 PM Thank you and to you as well, Andrea, hoping that your paradise was as warm and welcoming as your own home, Aloha!

Sara Kendrick Date: 11/28/2021 8:17:00 AM I have read your winning work and was delighted that it was in the winners' list. Congrats. Sara Login to Reply Hilo Poet Date: 11/28/2021 10:04:00 AM Thanks aplenty, Sara, and to you as well for your Ku, measure for measure my friend, Aloha!

Karen Jones Date: 11/26/2021 9:52:00 PM Congrats on your win! Login to Reply Hilo Poet Date: 11/27/2021 7:43:00 AM Thanks, Karen, 'twas kind of you, Aloha

Tania Kitchin Date: 11/26/2021 12:46:00 PM William, lovely autumn imagery, congratulations on your winning placement! Login to Reply Hilo Poet Date: 11/27/2021 7:42:00 AM Thanks, 'twas fun, Aloha

Christuraj Alex Date: 11/18/2021 1:15:00 AM Great, indeed! You have a rich and right vocabulary! Login to Reply Hilo Poet Date: 11/18/2021 1:36:00 AM Phew! Expedience affects expressive efficiency, Christuraj, thank you, Aloha!