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Tracing Thoughts

at night, i close my eyes and see your smile as it erases the distance between us; sometimes i feel like a poem lost somewhere in a poet's mind, a thought a dream waiting to be released on paper sheets i can almost hear them, unfinished poems falling like leaves in the silence of night tossed about in autumn's air as you write them out i want to feel the warmth of your touch, like a fingered-pen as you write me out from the depths of your mind, and be the breath that falls from your lips to sheets, a masterpiece being born again and again. sometimes i feel like the poet, lost within my own words and thoughts, breathless upon the stage after a midnight reading, yet, i want to read you again and again. i want to be the whisper that falls under the moon, a kiss beneath the stars, a breath from my lips to yours, be the silence of words and the only thought within your mind, or all the thoughts as you dream on sheets of white

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Date: 10/31/2012 12:34:00 PM
Couldn't read it fast enough. Your pen must have just jumped write out of your hand when you wrote it. Love the analogical tracings between love and poetry.
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Date: 10/20/2012 8:04:00 PM
This is an absolutely beautiful verse. I can almost relate to it and it's just overall very touching and heartfelt. Excellent one! Keep writing peas! You're amazing :D Always, Laura
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Date: 10/18/2012 3:57:00 PM
What a touching write!! You sure have a way with words Glad you like candy too lol. Hope you day was a good one. Hugs all day for you. Michael
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Date: 10/17/2012 6:48:00 AM
Really enjoyed the way the write flowed, written with tenderness and such passion
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