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Tracing My Thoughts

Trace these thought’s and find them Creating our memories sublime Let your mind wander Searching through it to find mine Place your tender lips upon these Let our tongues meet in heaven Tasting the richness of our souls Let there be no other question This Love shall never Decay Contest: Writing Challenge - Decay Sponsored by: Constance La France Date Created: 09/21/2020

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Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 10/2/2020 6:18:00 AM

- A lovely poem, Bobby :) - Congratulations on your win :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Eve Roper

Date: 9/29/2020 9:40:00 PM

lovely and romantic, Bobby, I know where your heart lies. Congratulations on your win! Hugs Eve

Sigrid Ermine

Date: 9/29/2020 4:59:00 PM

Congratulations, Bobby! - your gorgeous style deservedly Wins. Also I note rhymes ' question' with ' Heaven', (will love to keep this one up my sleeve) Have a splendid day, Poet!!

Constance La France

Date: 9/29/2020 1:52:00 PM

Bobby, congratulations on your win in my Decay Writing Challenge with this wonderful poem _Constance

Linda Alice Fowler

Date: 9/29/2020 11:11:00 AM

Beautifully done and quite sweet Bobby. Well done! Congratulations on the win! Linda

Sigrid Ermine

Date: 9/21/2020 11:09:00 PM

Bobby, a sweet rhyme. Meet in Heaven is so cool! I like the concentration of 't' s. Best of luck, - this is sure to be a hit with Constance..