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Tracing Lines of Lovely

My love Has become more beautiful line by line Her essence can be traced by looking behind On many special moments her life defined Her sadness Within her lines there is a trace Adding character to her lovely face From her spirit eminates such grace Her happy Those lovely lines around her lips I love to trace them with my finger tips With tea in hand she smiles and sips Her eyes Upturned lines that seem to glow Time is time it will not slow With each line her spirit grows Her individuality It is celebrated by every line I have never witnessed a woman more fine A vision in every way, I'm blessed she's mine Dedicated to my true love, who has never been more beautiful.

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Inner Whispers

Date: 5/1/2014 3:41:00 AM

hmn...HER! Lovely words outlining HER!

Richard Lamoureux
Date: 5/1/2014 8:29:00 AM

Thanks!

Monterey Sirak

Date: 4/19/2014 5:53:00 AM

Yes you are blessed, not only because of your beautiful wife, but because you are able to see the beauty that grows as we age.

Richard Lamoureux
Date: 4/19/2014 8:41:00 AM

They say in Europe that a woman grows into her beauty. I agree with that thought.

Suzanne Delaney

Date: 4/18/2014 2:03:00 AM

How beautiful this is. You are a poet in words and spirit. A most lovely tribute. SuZ

Richard Lamoureux
Date: 4/18/2014 7:51:00 AM

Thanks Suzanne.

Carrie Richards

Date: 4/17/2014 9:23:00 PM

What a exquisite and beautiful poem for your true love....... how fortunate you are, .....how fortunate is she.... You are blessed as a pair. :) Just beautiful !

Richard Lamoureux
Date: 4/18/2014 7:51:00 AM

Thanks so much Carrie.

Arthur Vaso

Date: 4/17/2014 10:49:00 AM

Yes this is a poem that should be read more than once!! :)

Richard Lamoureux
Date: 4/17/2014 10:53:00 AM

Why thank you kind sir. Have a great day.

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 4/17/2014 9:15:00 AM

So wonderful to know some men can appreciate the beauty of a woman as she ages, Richard. Truly admire the poem and the poet! Best wishes for a Happy Easter, Carolyn

Richard Lamoureux
Date: 4/17/2014 9:16:00 AM

Thanks Carolyn, happy Easter to you as well.

Paul Callus

Date: 4/17/2014 4:27:00 AM

Wow Richard! Such a lovely romantic poem. A dedication to the one and only...where even a touch of sadness adds to the beauty. May the magic linger on.....// paul

Richard Lamoureux
Date: 4/17/2014 8:29:00 AM

I expect it will.

Vera Duggan

Date: 4/16/2014 7:41:00 PM

Richard that is a beautiful dedication to your lady love, she sounds like one lovely lady and like me lucky to have such a wonderful soul mate, absolutely loved it..............Vera............

Richard Lamoureux
Date: 4/16/2014 7:46:00 PM

Thanks Vera, I am glad you also have found your special love. I met my wife 21 years ago this April.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 4/16/2014 4:16:00 PM

wow, this is so precious!!! Amazing poetry, Richard.

Richard Lamoureux
Date: 4/16/2014 4:26:00 PM

Thanks Andrea.

Donald Williams

Date: 4/16/2014 12:47:00 PM

I've got so much to catch up on, Looks like you've posted some awesome works. Looking forward to reading thorough them all.

Richard Lamoureux
Date: 4/16/2014 12:51:00 PM

Thanks Donald, I'm oper 24/7 drop by any time my friend.

Casarah Nance

Date: 4/16/2014 6:36:00 AM

Oh man, I hope you get a thousand hugs for that poem. You love is lucky to have you, and we are lucky you share with us. :)

Richard Lamoureux
Date: 4/16/2014 7:33:00 AM

Thanks Casarah, you are sweet. She shows me her love in a million different ways, in the end I am the one who feels blessed to be with her.

Mel Merrill

Date: 4/15/2014 11:57:00 PM

Wow Richard, this a great poem; a tribute to the beauty of your life--that is your life. So heavenly the gift you hold, an angel and your lovely wife. Such glad fortune, my friend. That you don't take her for granted is a tribute to your character. You're a good man, Richard. See you around, Mel :)

Richard Lamoureux
Date: 4/16/2014 7:37:00 AM

You are kind my friend. Thanks.

Arthur Vaso

Date: 4/15/2014 10:24:00 PM

Are you a real person? LOL Your other half is very lucky woman, and this truly a very beautiful poem! A7

Richard Lamoureux
Date: 4/16/2014 7:39:00 AM

I am real and flawed but try to do my best to be thankful. I'm glad you enjoyed my poem Arthur.

Tim Smith

Date: 4/15/2014 5:49:00 PM

What a lovely tribute to your true love Richard....Tim

Richard Lamoureux
Date: 4/16/2014 7:41:00 AM

Thanks so much Tim.

Harry Horsman

Date: 4/15/2014 3:47:00 PM

you take a simple word, and transform it to the most elegant of poetry,,,,in fact exceptional poetry

Richard Lamoureux
Date: 4/16/2014 7:42:00 AM

Wow, thanks Harry!

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 4/15/2014 1:57:00 PM

- Richard, this is beautifully written to your dear and beautiful wife - a poem with great value!! - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Richard Lamoureux
Date: 4/16/2014 7:43:00 AM

Thanks Anne Lise for this thoughtful comment.

Keith O.J. Hunt

Date: 4/15/2014 1:22:00 PM

Wonderful write Richard!

Richard Lamoureux
Date: 4/16/2014 7:44:00 AM

Thanks Keith, have a great day.

Mama Bear

Date: 4/15/2014 12:43:00 PM

Richard has described Mary beautifully but she is even more beautiful both in mind and body than mere words can describe. She and he are truly blessed. Love you both. Mom/Mamabear

Richard Lamoureux
Date: 4/15/2014 1:20:00 PM

I love you too mom!

Joyce Johnson

Date: 4/15/2014 10:48:00 AM

I am glad my poem inspired you to write this lovely poem for your wife. She is your true inspiration not my humble words. Love to you both, Joyce

Richard Lamoureux
Date: 4/15/2014 10:56:00 AM

Thanks Joyce.

Aiyah Torres

Date: 4/15/2014 10:00:00 AM

oh wow... a sweet and sincere dedication of love!!! ,,, wish you more cup of teas to share... :O)) lovely write, Rick!!! ^__^

Richard Lamoureux
Date: 4/15/2014 10:03:00 AM

Thanks AlyaH.

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser

Date: 4/15/2014 9:39:00 AM

A sweet dedication:) I pray for longer years of hapiness and love:) --olive_eloi

Richard Lamoureux
Date: 4/15/2014 10:04:00 AM

Thanks Olive, that is kind.

Eileen Manassian

Date: 4/15/2014 9:37:00 AM

Absolutely fabulous write, Richard. How beautiful....What a lovely gift for the love of your life. :) She must be glowing after reading this. I wish you many happy years together...blessed by heaven.

Eileen Manassian
Date: 4/15/2014 10:19:00 AM

;-)

Richard Lamoureux
Date: 4/15/2014 10:04:00 AM

I will love her from here to eternity. Thanks for your thoughtful blessing.