Laura Leiser Poet Free verse

Traces of Time

Distant memories 
     leave fleeting tracks 
         imprints in the snow
               frozen moments of time
                                     wiped clean.





Written on 10/21/2017

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Constance La France November 24, 2017 at 11:30 AM Laura, your poem is so beautiful, well done !

Viv Wigley November 14, 2017 at 10:02 PM Lovely, Laura. Viv x

Maureen McGreavy Pigeon Tart October 20, 2017 at 7:05 PM Potent perfect little poem :) xomo!

Silent One October 20, 2017 at 3:26 PM This is very deep, and a great way to describe the concept of time, which changes everything... Nice to see you back... Laura Leiser October 20, 2017 at 4:18 PM Thank you, Silent..your recent words encouraged my to return :)

Paul Callus October 20, 2017 at 2:20 PM Short but very lovely, Laura. Lovely also to be reading you again. Regards // paul Laura Leiser October 20, 2017 at 2:58 PM Thanks, Paul...I took a very loooong break!