Traces of Love

"How sweet to the heart are the scenes of my childhood"

                                   Samuel Woodworth, 1785-1842


Sweet childhood photographs-tattered and gray!
Yet warm and vibrant like the kiss of sun;                         
on my cheeks as I walk along the bay.                    
                                                                                   
I smile reminiscing of days bygone~        
of lullabies that grandma used to sing,                         
on midday naps after hide-and-seek fun.              

The giggles with my cousins on the swing,             
simply believing we could reach the sky~   
I sketched those moments in my heart to cling.                  

Still fresh the joy at play with pets nearby,
Oh, the paper boats that held my dream line;                                                 
The launch of first kite made me soared up high.                                                                           
                                                                                         
Fragments of memories cling like a vine;         
My diamond days that never cease to shine.

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11.12.2020


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For Constance La France' Terza Rima Form Poetry Contest   
2nd place


Entered for A Briand Strand Formal  Poetry Contest
1st place

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Date: 12/7/2020 11:28:00 AM
J, your poetry arouses so many pleasant memories of childhood and feeling free: kites, swings, pets, paper boats, the feel of sunshine. Those were indeed 'diamond days' and they shine, even if the pictures are tattered and gray. Well done, I love your writing ~ John
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Date: 12/5/2020 5:44:00 PM
I always did enjoy your poetry...quite unique in many delightful ways. Great writing! My very best wishes, JayBee. :) john
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Date: 11/30/2020 11:47:00 AM
Congratulations on the win JCB! Linda
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Date: 11/29/2020 7:14:00 AM
Hi JCB, Congratulations on your 2nd place win. Have a great day:-)Alexis
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Date: 11/29/2020 1:40:00 AM
KCB, congratulations on your win in my Terza Rima Contest with this wonderful and enchanting poem _Constance
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Date: 11/27/2020 3:21:00 AM
A lovely nostalgic poem of memories gone by...
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Date: 11/27/2020 1:38:00 AM
Happy days, beautiful childhood memories, a lovely read JCB... Belle
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Date: 11/26/2020 9:29:00 PM
What a beautiful poem of nostalgia!
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Date: 11/26/2020 7:52:00 PM
Such a beautiful poem, JCB, good luck in the contest. Hugs Eve
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Date: 11/26/2020 5:53:00 PM
I adore your entry. You took simple activities and made them so poetic.
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Date: 11/26/2020 4:53:00 PM
Your “diamond days” were marvelous, clearly shown in this beautiful poem.
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Date: 11/26/2020 4:56:00 PM
Thank you dear Caren...Childhood days are always diamond. More blessings.
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