Trace From Me To Them

I was so sure when I came by, 
That you
Not only couldn’t tell a lie
Moreover, 
You wouldn’t even try. 

Too wrapped in your deep eyes
To see,
How cunning your disguise 
Was shown:
An angel face of demon size. 

They all looked pleased to me, 
But were
Masks that I couldn’t see.
They had
Their fangs hidden under glee. 

They were approachable and sincere. 
All seemed
Expecting my next word of cheer.
So sad
That they were full of fear. 

I came with new and light
And they
Came with sneers and spite.
You sat
Just being beautiful and bright. 

You were my only to be bare. 
We took
The smiles out of their lair. 
You were
My perfect gift, so fair. 

As soon as I told you aloud,
The masks 
All fell and I felt cold. 
The sounds 
Were mine to count. 

You and I apart in dark
And soon,
Not one could be a mark
Of light.
You were becoming art.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009



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Date: 9/30/2009 1:29:00 PM
Just wanted to stop by and add--Congratulations on making it through the first round in the contest. Good luck in the finals! Karen
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Date: 9/25/2009 3:45:00 AM
Buna!!!! Nu-mi vine sa cred ca am mai gasit o ramanca pe Soup!! Foarte faina poezia si felicitari for it making it through the first round!!! Sper sa reusim sa mai vorbim! o sa-ti citesc din poezii si sper ca si ale mele vor fi pe placul tau!! hugs and kisses, Stephanie
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Date: 9/24/2009 4:29:00 PM
Stoica! Congrats on your beautiful poem Trace From Me to Them having won in the first round of the Poetrysoup contest. Best wishes for the Finals. -Mohammad
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Date: 9/24/2009 3:11:00 PM
Congratulations on your poem making it through the first round.Wishing you the best in the finals. Love, Carol
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Date: 9/5/2009 7:51:00 AM
Congratulations on your poetry being featured this week>>James
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Date: 9/3/2009 4:15:00 PM
Congratulations on your featured poem. Sara
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Date: 9/2/2009 12:27:00 PM
This is a well deserved feature … what a creative, wonderful poem, I love every bit of it. You are such a great poet. Please keep writing and congrats on your poem being featured this week. Hope to read more of your wonderful pieces. You are great ! Adeleke
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Date: 9/1/2009 5:41:00 AM
Congratulations, Luminita, on having your well-written poem featured this week. Keep writing. Lovingly, Dane
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Date: 8/31/2009 11:41:00 PM
Luminita, congrats on your feature this week...Raul
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Date: 8/31/2009 4:07:00 PM
Interesting perspective for the reader to think about. Congratulations on having your poem featured. I wish you continued success with your writing. Karen
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Date: 8/31/2009 12:42:00 PM
Loved of you arranged your poem. I can get so stuck sometimes in writing a poem that rhymes the typical way that I forget to just let my creativity run free. I love the flow of your poem. Congratulations on your poem getting featured.
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Date: 8/31/2009 3:59:00 AM
Congratulations on your poetry being featured this week Luminita. Hope to see many more of yours featured. Love, Carol
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