TOY

Tinkering with red and green bricks Older than legos, redoubtable fun Yesteryear’s rudimentary dream house

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Paige Hind

Date: 5/1/2025 5:17:00 PM

How practical would it be to buy an adult house for the price of the kid house! You wrote of those memories so well, sigh <3

Paula Goldsmith

Date: 5/1/2025 11:59:00 AM

What a fun write you have here. I enjoyed reading your "TOY" write. "Good Luck" We both did this one. Have a Blessed day writing away..........

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 5/1/2025 2:31:00 PM

Thank you, Paula!

Hilda Greenhough

Date: 5/1/2025 11:24:00 AM

Old, wooden blocks were better for the environment. I enjoy the memory quality in your poem.

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 5/1/2025 2:31:00 PM

Thank you, Hilda!

Valsa George

Date: 5/1/2025 9:41:00 AM

Amazing depth within such brevity. All the Best dear Kim.

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 5/1/2025 9:46:00 AM

Thank you, Valsa! :)

Yann Rolland

Date: 5/1/2025 3:31:00 AM

exquisite poetry, creativity at best, inspiring poem, enjoyed

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 5/1/2025 9:46:00 AM

Thank you, dear one!

Akham Nilabirdhwaja Singh

Date: 5/1/2025 2:50:00 AM

The joy so well expressed in a few lines.Wisb the best

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 5/1/2025 4:57:00 AM

The memory euphoric. I remember the windows and doors too. We didn’t have the internet but only our own imagination, collaborations with parents and peers. Hugs ~ Kim