TOY

Tinkering with red and green bricks
Older than legos, redoubtable fun
Yesteryear’s rudimentary dream house

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thriveni c mysore

Date: 5/4/2025 10:34:00 PM

dream house yes, Congratulations on your win dear poet. Cheers!!!

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 5/5/2025 8:19:00 AM

Thank you!

Valsa George

Date: 5/4/2025 10:31:00 PM

Hi Kim, back to your poem with Congratulations on your first place win.

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 5/5/2025 8:20:00 AM

Thank you!

Paula Goldsmith

Date: 5/4/2025 12:04:00 PM

Back with Congratulations on your win. I enjoyed reading your "TOY" write again. Have a Blessed Day with your Win..........

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 5/5/2025 8:20:00 AM

Thank you!

Krishnanand Guptar

Date: 5/4/2025 11:48:00 AM

Congratulations dear poetess on your top win in this contest with a thoughtful write on toy of our youth. Now games on mobile and computers are taking its place... Sending you light of blessings.

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 5/5/2025 8:21:00 AM

Oh how much the kids miss out on…using their own mind and imagination. There is an upside with learning! Hugs

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 5/4/2025 10:33:00 AM

- Congratulations on your Acrostic poem " Toy " in the contest, Kim :) - hugs

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 5/5/2025 8:19:00 AM

Thank you!

Sotto Poet

Date: 5/3/2025 6:03:00 PM

Back with congratulations on your win, Kim

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 5/4/2025 5:31:00 AM

Thank you, Lasaad!

Maclawrence Famuyiwa

Date: 5/3/2025 3:37:00 PM

This is surely well written. Congrats.

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 5/4/2025 5:31:00 AM

Thank you kindly!

Paige Hind

Date: 5/1/2025 5:17:00 PM

How practical would it be to buy an adult house for the price of the kid house! You wrote of those memories so well, sigh <3

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 5/4/2025 5:31:00 AM

Thank you, Paige!

Paula Goldsmith

Date: 5/1/2025 11:59:00 AM

What a fun write you have here. I enjoyed reading your "TOY" write. "Good Luck" We both did this one. Have a Blessed day writing away..........

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 5/1/2025 2:31:00 PM

Thank you, Paula!

Hilda Greenhough

Date: 5/1/2025 11:24:00 AM

Old, wooden blocks were better for the environment. I enjoy the memory quality in your poem.

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 5/1/2025 2:31:00 PM

Thank you, Hilda!

Valsa George

Date: 5/1/2025 9:41:00 AM

Amazing depth within such brevity. All the Best dear Kim.

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 5/1/2025 9:46:00 AM

Thank you, Valsa! :)

Yann Rolland

Date: 5/1/2025 3:31:00 AM

exquisite poetry, creativity at best, inspiring poem, enjoyed

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 5/1/2025 9:46:00 AM

Thank you, dear one!

Akham Nilabirdhwaja Singh

Date: 5/1/2025 2:50:00 AM

The joy so well expressed in a few lines.Wisb the best

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 5/1/2025 4:57:00 AM

The memory euphoric. I remember the windows and doors too. We didn’t have the internet but only our own imagination, collaborations with parents and peers. Hugs ~ Kim