Towers

I blame Australia for bagging you. 
What is bigger than friends, tell me, 

A continent; a beach house flat – 
Room enough for a pony?

Even the beautiful pond house
Couldn’t keep you. 

Although big enough to carry off
A leaving, a parting gift – 

Parted us like oceans; 
Crushed infinite embraces. 

How absurd then, growing up beside you, 
Our arms ache for holding too long. 

A simple slip off the back of your shoulders, 
We fall to ruins. 

And kingdoms collapse in the last look, 
The sight of you in the rear view mirror

Fills up with shops closing down; 
Dead cities creep in. 

Dithering down the A road, coughing
Our way back to Millard, 

We knew we would see you again, 
But not to recognize this time. 

Better to keep the last thirty odd years
Locked up in some identity parade; 

The three of us, standing there; 
Knowing you had got away with murder.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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Agustin Avatar
November 4, 2025 at 11:03 PM
Thanks for sharing this... exposing your thoughts through your unique poetic style. Meanwhile, I greet you with the love of the Lord, expressed by John 3:16 of the Bible, "For God so loved the world, that he gave his only begotten Son, that whosoever believeth in him should not perish, but have everlasting life." Be blessed.
A  Avatar
January 30, 2016 at 1:40 PM
LOUIS, A great pleasure to find and read your pen today. Love -- SKAT --
Brown Avatar
August 3, 2011 at 3:07 PM
Congratulations on your poetry making it through round one in the PoetrySoup International Poetry contest Louis. I wish you the best in the final round. Love, Carol
Guy Avatar
June 25, 2011 at 7:48 PM
L.P., Sara says interesting, i say intriguing, both say listening. ;-)
Brown Avatar
June 23, 2011 at 7:22 AM
Congratulations on your well deserved poetry being featured this week Louis. Love, Carol
Kendrick Avatar
February 26, 2011 at 6:29 AM
Interesting write...I especially like the begining six or eight lines about what would be big enough to hold you..It reminded of Robert Frost's poem about men feeling trapped when they had the microscope and telescope..Enjoyed your work..Sara
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