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Tower In Slumber

Mild is the air that embraces this place as daybreak heralds its twittering sigh. The entrance stands majestic though alone With strains of minuet that can beguile. The castle’s horn purrs for the Prince and wife she, regaling halls with fairy-like strokes. One beautiful power the court adores gentle her glow, the pride of renaissance. Through walks beyond the gate , into the mead A piper enhances the Lady’s young heart. Sweeter the tune, she follows a winding track Where river deep clutches her lace-tied feet. Tower wails an unending hymn of pyre while the Prince spills flowers down through the moat. In slumber’s demeanor, lies his Lady fair; a castle once brimming now stooping low. 10th Contest Castles 1.31.14

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Date: 2/5/2014 1:47:00 PM
you are beginning to place in different challeges, franco... like the mood of this.. congrats
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Date: 2/4/2014 7:14:00 PM
Well done and sad tale, congrats.
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Date: 2/4/2014 11:38:00 AM
Well written piece! Big congrats to you, Frenco!!
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Date: 2/4/2014 6:14:00 AM
Enjoyed your write on castle and congrats on the win, Franco
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Date: 2/3/2014 11:57:00 PM
hi Franco excellent poem though I would have liked more about the castle instead of the people congrats on3rd place ty for entering Shadow x smile hug
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