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Towards Our Love

Leave your fake hill And come with me To my dream mountain Of ecstasy. Engrave your name On every stone That builds every part around my untouched heart. Leave your house of uncertainty And come with me To my large castle of belief And just believe, Believe in me, Believe in us, In every step we could take, Towards the truth, Towards the reality, Towards our love.

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Carl Fraser

Date: 11/23/2012 4:52:00 PM

Very sweet journey you have taken us on Omneya, very well penned. Blessings ,Carl

Vicky Tsiluma

Date: 11/21/2012 10:15:00 PM

Beautiful write! I like the title "Towards Our Love", it shows that the journey is ongoing and the destination is well clear in mind. I also like how you said 'Leave your fake hill', it foretells of better options to be realized if the one just took a chance and believed. Very well penned Omneya! Nice!

Sara Kendrick

Date: 11/21/2012 6:23:00 AM

Ahh!!Very passionate...Who would not come to your castle..Enjoyed reading this morn..Thanks for stopping by..Sara

Ndaba Sibanda

Date: 11/17/2012 3:45:00 PM

Beautful and believable.

Omneya Kamal
Date: 11/21/2012 6:08:00 AM

Thanksss Ndaba!:) Glad you liked the Poem, Love, Omneya

Michael J. Falotico

Date: 11/17/2012 3:42:00 PM

Very positive piece on how the road of love can be seen... you are a wonderful poet... and your comments on my "Poetic Tears" were so sweet and appreciated.. hugs Michael

Omneya Kamal
Date: 11/21/2012 6:07:00 AM

Thanks Micheal, So glad you liked this Poem, Thanks for stopping by, Have a great day, Omneya