Omneya Kamal Poet Free verse

Towards Our Love

Leave your fake hill 
And come with me 
To my dream mountain 
Of ecstasy.
Engrave your name 
On every stone 
That builds every part
around my untouched heart.

Leave your house of uncertainty
And come with me 
To my large castle of belief
And just believe,
Believe in me,
Believe in us,
In every step we could take,
Towards the truth, 
Towards the reality,
Towards our love.

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Carl Fraser November 23, 2012 at 4:52 PM Very sweet journey you have taken us on Omneya, very well penned. Blessings ,Carl

Vicky Tsiluma November 21, 2012 at 10:15 PM Beautiful write! I like the title "Towards Our Love", it shows that the journey is ongoing and the destination is well clear in mind. I also like how you said 'Leave your fake hill', it foretells of better options to be realized if the one just took a chance and believed. Very well penned Omneya! Nice!

Sara Kendrick November 21, 2012 at 6:23 AM Ahh!!Very passionate...Who would not come to your castle..Enjoyed reading this morn..Thanks for stopping by..Sara

Ndaba Sibanda November 17, 2012 at 3:45 PM Beautful and believable. Omneya Kamal November 21, 2012 at 6:08 AM Thanksss Ndaba!:) Glad you liked the Poem, Love, Omneya

Michael J. Falotico November 17, 2012 at 3:42 PM Very positive piece on how the road of love can be seen... you are a wonderful poet... and your comments on my "Poetic Tears" were so sweet and appreciated.. hugs Michael Omneya Kamal November 21, 2012 at 6:07 AM Thanks Micheal, So glad you liked this Poem, Thanks for stopping by, Have a great day, Omneya