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Towards a Grand Idea

The morning seemed unreal, too perfect in a way - the waking river where small boats ignited like candles on being lit by first light and where a cormorant dived into a blazing sun. And here, where a certain magic began to find its way into the great, glowing bulk of a passing ship towing its fiery wake down river towards a grand idea that was forming in a corner of the mind. I should have left it there in the unspoken margins of the morning, to gather and let it warm, as cormorants do by stretching out their wings to catch the sun. I was too impatient and fell back into where all things are restrained within their own space and have a name.

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Date: 4/5/2023 5:04:00 AM
I know the feeling, wonderful poem. I can't say for sure that there are many minds like mine that resonate so strongly with these observations but I feel sure there must be. Your poetry is so well presented and perfectly formed that it feels it should really be in a book and not hidden. The great thing I think I'm enjoying is nothing is really presented as bleak. So far no lost in the void stuff but recognition of a mood which will pass. Oops a dog and two children have just jumped on my knee
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Paul Willason
Date: 4/5/2023 3:36:00 PM
Blush with such comments Dilly, however honored to learn that this poem deeply connected, It is reassuring to know that what moved me to find voice in a poem somehow comes through and is picked up by a reader, recognised as something in common. Echoes from the universe that we are not alone. Thanks for tuning in to the frequency.

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