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Tounge Twister

Eight elephants ate eight eggs on Easter in England with eighty eight elves.

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Gwendolen Song

Date: 10/29/2011 7:36:00 PM

Hi Cory, Thanks for this British Twister....It was a very competitive entry...yours had a great image that the kids enjoyed...the judging was super fun with 5 school-aged children and 2 very out of control adults! ha ha ..kidding about the adults...it really was the kids who were laughing hysterically! Anyways, thanks for supporting my contest...like I said, it was blind judging...I don't even know everyone who entered. All the best, Cory! GWendolen

Dinda Minardi

Date: 10/7/2011 11:57:00 AM

it is hard, how could you do that? hard tongue twister in simple words. Wow!

Sara Kendrick

Date: 10/1/2011 5:22:00 PM

Enjoyed your creative work using your imagination and Alliteration..Thanks for stopping by..Sara