Touching Grace and Forgiveness

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the truth can always speak plainly as it is

Life becomes cruel when we plainly see lost souls within our families its like walking on broken glass each step hurts the heart trying to save them while love still has a chance

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Curtis Moorman

Date: 1/20/2020 4:13:00 AM

Liam, after reading the first poem of yours, I had to read more. How very right you are about lost ones in the family. I am Blessed to have a son who is a pastor, but I have other family members who have not accepted the Truth. We must continue to love and pray for them and hope they will see the light of God's Word before it is too late. By the way, my son has a son named Liam!

Dorian Petersen Potter

Date: 1/10/2020 8:44:00 AM

Hi Liam!:)) Powerful poem you've written my dearest friend Liam. Wow!Very beautifully penned!Awesome!:) I agree!I've been there n 'still there a lot!And yes, it really hurts alot for sure.But with our Lord Jesus we can have Love Hope Light Salvation!So lets pray more for all, especially all the blind,lost,very evil souls of this world!Your pen is truly mighty golden!A fav !You have a beautiful heart!To me you're always the best in everything Liam.So very beautiful,romantic,gentle n' sweet.I really hope n' pray a lot that you n' your very dear family are OK in all, Liam.Remember that the Lords always with you!Wishing you always all the very best in everything you do, n' please take very good care of yourself,okay, Liam!:) Please keep positive n’ very strong!Always keeping you in my heart, thoughts n' prayers!Keep your faith in Jesus!Keep your love hopes n' follow your dreams always too:))Wishing you a very lovely weekend!In His light God bless you always!:))Love n' hugs!xoxox D.^O^