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Touched Her Heart

When I close my eyes, I see my grandma in her youth tending her flower garden. And clad in sandals, she'd wiggle her toes while lightly fingering the tactile earth. Donning her favorite faded straw hat, she'd spend hours amidst these floral jewels. For she was very fond of bright colors and often looked like a flower herself. With a pair of flashy plastic earrings and her knitted shawl, she looked like a doll. And blended right in with her surroundings, as if she was planted there by nature. She enjoyed smelling and gently stroking the blooms as they opened to her senses. And treated her roses as living art, priceless masterpieces that touched her heart. (Blank Verse) 2/26/2016
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Gauthier Avatar
May 26, 2018 at 7:39 PM
Grand-mothers are angels waling the earth, as you know, Emile.
Pinet Avatar
May 27, 2018 at 7:56 AM
Thanks Line, I appreciate your support my friend, Emile.
Vaso Avatar
February 26, 2016 at 10:08 PM
"each a masterpiece she stored in her heart" and too think your turned out to be one, with such observation and compassion for humanity!
Pinet Avatar
February 27, 2016 at 7:57 AM
Thank you Arthur, what a nice thing to say. Emile.
Godwin Avatar
February 26, 2016 at 8:26 PM
A beautiful and touching tribute (if true) to your Granny. If fiction, it touches my heart in the place that belongs to my Granny. I enjoyed this sentimental write very much ... CayCay
Pinet Avatar
February 27, 2016 at 7:56 AM
Thanks so much CayCay, I appreciate your comments, this is part true and part poetic license. Emile.
Onclaud Avatar
February 26, 2016 at 11:47 AM
picturesque view of the garden and your grandma, both really ostentatious: very nice, emile.. huggs
Pinet Avatar
February 26, 2016 at 12:26 PM
Thanks Nette, I appreciate your comments. Emile.
Manassian Avatar
February 26, 2016 at 11:26 AM
Lovely picture of your grandma. Is the last word in the 3rd line a typo? Sandals? Hugs
Pinet Avatar
February 26, 2016 at 12:28 PM
Thanks Eileen, I'm glad you caught that typo, I appreciate it. Emile.
Lane Avatar
February 26, 2016 at 9:56 AM
This is sugar sweet. My grandmother always grew pastel colored sweet peas upon a trellis. How nice that we hold on to these memories, Emile.
Pinet Avatar
February 26, 2016 at 12:30 PM
Thanks Lin, yes memories can be an important piece in the puzzle of life, I appreciate your comments. Emile.
Babbit Avatar
February 26, 2016 at 9:41 AM
Reminds me of my gram as well. I think over the years, I am becoming her. What anice portrayal, Thank you, Emile.
Pinet Avatar
February 26, 2016 at 12:31 PM
Thanks so much DM, I appreciate your comments. Emile.
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