Touched By Death

Tears fall from faces of those touched by death
to be infused into the soul to hide
never will they leave, they'll stay with each breathe
and change the look of the world from inside
the bright daylight becomes a dim-lit light
and night becomes a lonely dark deep shade
wishes and dreams of a loved one take flight
and all the years they never lived will fade
yesterday's vanished and tomorrow's gone
yet, the bloodstream of emptiness will flow
the sun will rise on every lonely dawn
and the face in the mind will never grow
too many empty days of shades and realms
too many empty nights that overwhelms

2/26/22
contest G-Give me a new poem-Death
sponsor Constance La France
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Kendrick Avatar
March 14, 2022 at 3:36 AM
I have read your winning entry and was delighted to see it on the winners' list. Congratulations on your place of honor. Way to go. Sara
La France Avatar
March 4, 2022 at 12:59 AM
Frederic, congratulations on your win in my Give Me A New Poem Contest with your beautiful poem, and I love the music too ~Constance
Parker Avatar
March 4, 2022 at 12:24 PM
Thank you Constance for your kindness and your contests
Miller Avatar
March 1, 2022 at 11:59 PM
An excellent poem, and a well-deserved win, congratulations.
Lawrence Avatar
February 27, 2022 at 12:51 PM
Very poignant ..deep emotions and intimacy here Frederick. yesterday's vanished and tomorrow's gone yet, the bloodstream of emptiness will flow. Pain and loss so evident here. Blessing to you and best of luck in the contest, Susan :)
Parker Avatar
February 27, 2022 at 4:19 PM
Susan thank you for your kind remark, blessings to you
Baker Avatar
February 26, 2022 at 4:41 PM
Very power poem Frederick. Good luck in the contest. Seems like you've experienced the events described in your poem. May your soul be comforted, Bill
Parker Avatar
February 26, 2022 at 6:58 PM
thank you Bill, yes up close and personal
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