Touch Therapy - 1

As sanskrit simmers
upon the splintered mind
of savaged souls
the evolution of emotion
eloquently enters the environ
of your vulnerable virtue,
entreating the crying heat of your heart
to hasten no more
towards the shadow of shame,

Her Shadow sang the sorrow
of a suppressed sweetness,
a love forbidden in the phobia
of the world's dervishing dystopia,
sanctuary was not in her heart,
it belonged in her heated nerves
the expressway of uncompromised courage,
Her Shadow knows how her skin sweats
when the Damned dismiss her love,
Shadow knows how her eyes sting
from anything mean to her sincerity,
her Shadow holds her tears
in hands of ivory,
fantasizes that rage is beauty...

J.A.B.  2023

Copyright © | Year Posted 2023



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Date: 4/27/2025 2:07:00 PM
This is absolutely breathtaking. “The evolution of emotion eloquently enters the environ of your vulnerable virtue” really struck me. The imagery of “her Shadow holds her tears in hands of ivory” is so powerful and tender. You captured sorrow, resilience, and beauty so flawlessly. Truly moving, every line lingers long after reading. I look forward to reading the rest of this series.
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Justin Bordner
Date: 4/27/2025 6:43:00 PM
Thanks for your heartfelt excitement Billie. Do our emotions dictate our thoughts, or do our thoughts determine our emotions...sometimes I wonder how that dynamic unfolds. I'm happy to linger on your inquisitive heartbeats...J.A.B.
Date: 4/12/2025 7:12:00 PM
This reads like a prayer for every woman who's ever felt too much. You’ve captured the ache of being misunderstood--the way emotion simmers just beneath skin and bone. I felt her shadow. Her sorrow. Her rage reimagined as beauty. Your words hold so much depth… they don’t just speak--they listen. Thank you for writing her with tenderness, and for showing how powerful soft things can be.
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Justin Bordner
Date: 4/13/2025 8:41:00 AM
Your poetic expressions of the heart's perceptions are extraordinary Alesia. Your feelings and understanding affirm this poem's spirit which means very much to me. You help to extend the life of this poem...J.A.B.
Date: 2/13/2025 1:29:00 AM
I love how the words dance between vulnerability and strength, Justin. It inspires one to transform rage into into beauty, and sweat and tears into an act of resilience and courage. There’s a quiet power in being unapologetically real despite a dismissive often cruel world. Always, Laura
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Justin Bordner
Date: 2/14/2025 6:34:00 PM
Yes Laura, we must be real to feel the truth of our love born, borne, within, to conquer the conflict of expectations. Your thoughts are a treasure Poetess...J.A.B
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