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Tears of joy fell feeling your first touch Overcome with love and grace a bond grew Unity, we've shared for so many years Concord is where you take me in my mind Harmony, the state we'll dwell, till my end
6/26/2017
Concord- a harmonious state of things and of their properties "I take it, then, that we are working in unison,—at least, in Concord?" Wells, Carolyn

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Date: 6/28/2017 7:50:00 PM
Sweet poem Jeremy; I hope you do well in the contest! :)
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Jeremy Smith
Date: 6/28/2017 7:54:00 PM
Thanks Alyssa for coming to see my entry :)
Date: 6/26/2017 4:13:00 PM
Great acrostic Jeremy, my you are really improving and learning fast, (fyi you used joy twice, suggest synonym as repeated words usually discounted)
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Jeremy Smith
Date: 6/26/2017 4:19:00 PM
Thank you, for the compliment John. I truly appreciate it!!
Date: 6/26/2017 3:45:00 PM
Very lovely thoughts, Jeremy. I enjoyed seeing this one today. In fact, it's all I can see. I need to get home and just read your little soupmail.
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Jeremy Smith
Date: 6/26/2017 3:47:00 PM
Thank you, Andrea!! I am very happy you like it :)
Date: 6/26/2017 3:06:00 PM
aw beautiful and so touching Jeremy - when you find that right person never let them go:-) hugs Jan xx
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Jeremy Smith
Date: 6/26/2017 3:10:00 PM
So true considering only with true love do we have these feelings :) Thank you, Jan so much for your comment and view!!
Date: 6/26/2017 2:53:00 PM
Very nice Jeremy. Good luck in the contest :)
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Jeremy Smith
Date: 6/26/2017 2:55:00 PM
Thank you, Heidi :)
Date: 6/26/2017 2:08:00 PM
Beautiful Jeremy :) Good luck!
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Jeremy Smith
Date: 6/26/2017 2:15:00 PM
Thank you, Darren I appreciate the comment and view as always :)

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