Touch Me Here

Through my closed eyelids the soft light 
looks at my skin, warm from the sun.
I hear no one and wish anyone were here.
My chest inhales to cool my blood, pounding,
saying, 'flight or fight'.

'Touch me', I think. If you were here, you would touch me.
Hands cool and rough; gently hold my legs above the knees:
'long and lithe', you say.
'I want to open my eyes now', I am glazed over and dull.
Please. I can't not come with you today. You were gone
and I wanted you.

I'll tell you quietly, 'your hands are golden,' or I'll keep 
Quiet and breathe shallow near your ear. I'll tell you, 
"You're a god," if you touch me here. I can wait until the sun 
drops out of the sky, dew condensing on the grass, cold and green.
I prefer the sun, but I'll lay on the cool lawn at dusk.
Just touch me here.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2013

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March Avatar
December 26, 2013 at 12:44 PM
This is sensual, A very good poem, It leaves one awake and dreaming. Well done
A   Avatar
December 11, 2013 at 9:59 AM
love the win Daisy.. Congratulations in "'Charlotte's Scorchers: Erotic/Sensual Poetry''...have a nice one... LUV LINDA
Kimathi Avatar
December 9, 2013 at 7:27 AM
A really wonderful piece. Great creativity! ;-)
Dietrich Avatar
December 8, 2013 at 4:24 PM
Daisy, this is great erotic writing. Glad to see a poem of yours today. Congrats on your well deserved win.
Jones Avatar
December 7, 2013 at 7:49 PM
Really liked this one...alluring! Congratulations
Hamilton Avatar
December 7, 2013 at 7:49 PM
really lovely poem Daisy congrats on win Shadow x smile hug
Puddifoot Avatar
December 7, 2013 at 7:09 PM
something about this one I really liked - very real, simple in many ways but that's part of its charm; I particularly like the first three lines - congrats on your win in my contest :)
Zafar Avatar
December 1, 2013 at 4:39 AM
Great!!! Sooooooooooooooo Lovely!!! Thanks for sharing with us! Regards, Aejaz
Melugin Avatar
November 29, 2013 at 9:26 AM
Burning, yearning heart!
Goodman Avatar
November 29, 2013 at 12:44 PM
so it is!
Ranganawa Avatar
November 27, 2013 at 7:38 AM
Masterpiece. i love it
Goodman Avatar
November 27, 2013 at 9:18 AM
Thank you for your encouragement! :) I'd love to read some of your work.
Mcdaid Avatar
November 26, 2013 at 7:15 AM
beautifully penned piece
Goodman Avatar
November 26, 2013 at 8:21 AM
thank you :)
Andresen Avatar
November 26, 2013 at 5:25 AM
- A romantic and beautiful poem Daisy - beautiful feelings and words. - (Wish summer was here :) .... but winter is just starting :( - // Anne-Lise :)
Goodman Avatar
November 26, 2013 at 5:50 AM
there is nothing like getting married at 20, and having your husband leave for deployment 2 weeks later...
Goodman Avatar
November 26, 2013 at 5:48 AM
thanks! I live in sunny florida, it's always summer here! Miss the changing seasons, winter is so beautiful when it never comes.
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