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Touch Cindy

On Friday nights a melting pot, descends upon the pub, truck drivers, cockies, factory hands, and workers from the scrub, to mingle in the many shouts, that see their glasses fill, who leave before they’re entertained, by workers from the mill. The timber boys with blackened hands, and sawdust through their hair, throw their cheques upon the bar, then drink without a care, not one of them was impolite, the opposite in fact, but beer became their nemesis, and quick they would react. So, many leave the pub at night, with blood upon their face, while they who nurse a swollen hand, rest at the coppers place, ‘mine host’ is left with his regrets, knows what he’d like to do, he’d like to ban the lot of them, but they spend money too. As one drifts on another comes, to pull out from the saw, the circuit is a common one, for those who work and war, this Friday night’s a first time here, for one who’s name is Bob, he’d like to celebrate with us, his first week on the job. “Whose is the dog outside?” was heard, Bob quickly turned his head, “It’s mine, the only friend I’ve got, touch Cindy and you’re dead”, there came no argument at all, for the night was early yet, but I thought it best I get on home, before the ‘hour of regret’. Touch Cindy, touch Cindy, touch Cindy and you’re dead. Touch Cindy, touch Cindy, keeps running through my head. It was dark and after midnight, when I heard the siren wail, ‘Hello,’ I thought, ‘It’s on again, who’s ‘gunna’ need some bail’, but then a sense of distance came, they stopped out near the hill, not the expectation of the pub, more likely at the mill. I saw a glow behind the blinds, of course there was a fire, then more sirens stirred the air, there must be something dire, I’m out of bed; back in my clothes, and driving to the mill, there’s lights of blue and lights of red, plus further sirens still. A pile of ash in smoke and steam, is all that’s left to see, with haggard faces looking on, one cried hysterically, she’s a witness to the scene, when the caravan caught fire, ‘twas then I heard that it was Bob, who perished in that pyre. “He was safe,” she’s screaming out, “Then frantically he cried, as he rushed back into the van, ‘my mates back there inside!’ with his hand clasped to the collar... I remember what Bob said, when he warned us at the pub, ‘Touch Cindy and you’re dead’. Touch Cindy, touch Cindy, keeps running through my head.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015




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Date: 2/17/2019 9:58:00 AM
What a fantastic poem - Bob sacrificed his life for Cindy, his only friend - so they both died. You write such detailed poems Lindsay, they tell a complete story and are always entertaining, though this was was sad, still an excellent write. I was fortunate I could still run out, but most of those things could have never been replaced. Maybe in real-life I wouldn't have been so brave however! Poetry hugs, Jennifer.
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Lindsay Laurie
Date: 2/22/2019 5:16:00 PM
Thank you Jennifer … this completely devastated the little country town I lived in. Was it bravery or silliness? He was safe, but Cindy meant more than life itself to him. Thank you Jennifer - Lindsay
Date: 4/6/2015 7:05:00 PM
That's one fantastic verse! a 7 and a fav Light & Love
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Lindsay Laurie
Date: 4/7/2015 8:37:00 PM
Thank you Debbie for your fine comment. I appreciate it. Catch you soon - Lindsay
Date: 3/22/2015 11:04:00 PM
Oh my gosh! Can you tell a riveting story in poetic form, or what? This is absolutely first rate . . . a treasure. What a gift! A "7" and then some.
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Lindsay Laurie
Date: 3/27/2015 2:32:00 AM
Hello Paul... thank you for your encouraging comment Paul. It really helps when this unfortunate tale is true. Thanks mate - Lindsay
Date: 3/8/2015 12:45:00 PM
This is great Lindsay, kept me enthralled right from the start, love how you laid out the story...a 7 indeed!
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Lindsay Laurie
Date: 3/11/2015 7:19:00 PM
G'day Suburban... thanks for reading and writing a comment. I'm pleased that you enjoyed this set of lyrics. Appreciated - Lindsay
Date: 3/4/2015 12:16:00 PM
You have a great style, Lindsay. What I particularly like is the lack of overt sentimentality. You let the reader fill in the blanks w/o hitting them over the head with it. Prime example of "show, don't tell".
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Lindsay Laurie
Date: 3/11/2015 7:15:00 PM
G'day Roy... thank you for your encouraging comment Roy. This event actually happened Roy and it was sad as you could imagine in a small community. I guess I'm like you and attempt to put up a picture in words instead of having to reach for a dictionary to find out what a word actually means. And thanks for the advice you've been giving me Roy; I do appreciate it. - Lindsay
Date: 3/3/2015 6:15:00 PM
You captivated me at the very beginning and until the very end. What a way you have to tell a story. Keep writing. Hugs Janet
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Lindsay Laurie
Date: 3/3/2015 9:10:00 PM
G'day Janet... Thanks again for putting up a comment Janet. I do reckon some stories can be told better in a bush ballad because it cuts out a lot of unnecessary dialogue so the lines must be kept tight. Thank you once again Janet - Lindsay
Date: 2/25/2015 5:33:00 PM
You definately know how to captivate the reader my friend!.. Excellent story telling!.. Hugs... Arlene
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Lindsay Laurie
Date: 2/27/2015 9:24:00 PM
Hi there Arlene... Thanks for reading and leaving an encouraging comment. I must admit I do enjoy writing yarns that usually evolve from facts. Catch you soon Arlene - Lindsay
Date: 2/25/2015 4:05:00 AM
Lindsay, that is so good, so Aussie, you are such a great storyteller, keep it up my friend, we will miss you if ever you left the site, great work, take care my friend...........Vera..............
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Lindsay Laurie
Date: 2/27/2015 9:17:00 PM
Thank you for your comment Vera. I have no intentions of pulling up stumps. Sometimes I think a yarn is better told as a bush ballad if it is at all possible because it cuts out a lot of unnecessary dialogue, but; this is just me. Catch you soon Vera - Lindsay
Date: 2/21/2015 3:34:00 AM
wow Lindsay what a fine story teller you are - i was hooked from start to end - a beautiful but touching sad story - :-) Hugs Jan 7 xx xx
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Lindsay Laurie
Date: 2/21/2015 5:25:00 PM
G'day Jan... Unfortunately many years ago Jan, this happened in our little town and so I attempted to keep Robert's memory alive. Thanks for reading and commenting Jan - Lindsay

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