Totem -- Odom

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There actually IS a professional basketball player named Lamar Odom. As for the rest of the limerick, ... well, ...

A basketball player named Odom Wants to dribble the balls in his scrotum He tries to bounce them Hardwood boards renounce them Odom can't put 'em back ~ has to tote 'em!

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Maureen McGreavy The Insolent Rib

Date: 8/4/2018 6:55:00 AM

A new meaning to "globe trotter" ;p You are Hilarious! xomo <3

Maureen McGreavy The Insolent Rib
Date: 8/5/2018 2:04:00 PM

...that's the spot, don't stop!

Gershon Wolf
Date: 8/4/2018 10:26:00 PM

Wicked wisdom, Mo. Your comebacks are worth writing more of these for, my ingenious-genius friend. This one is right up there with 'loin shark.' ~ Still laughing here in Chicago, gw

Samuel Otieng

Date: 8/4/2018 6:02:00 AM

Hahaha...well penned Gershon.

Gershon Wolf
Date: 8/4/2018 10:28:00 PM

Always good to laugh, Samuel. Thanks for checking this one. (Just imagine Odom double-dribbling! ---On second thought, let's not go there...) ~ Gershon

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 8/3/2018 7:25:00 PM

haha. a really funny image, Gershon!!

Gershon Wolf
Date: 8/3/2018 7:37:00 PM

Thank you!! ~ gw