Total White Out

Driving South Dakota in December Means you’re a “Stupid Club” member I’d never even heard of a “White Out” That’s what this story’s all about Cruising along and relaxed as can be My three daughters, my wife and me You could see for miles, the land was so flat Heard truckers do a CB chat Heard one of them say “It’s blowing ahead” But couldn’t quite hear all they said But in twenty miles I knew what he meant Cause into a snow storm we went We found ourselves in a total “White Out” It was a “Ground Blizzard”, no doubt Strong winds blowing horizontal to land Should we go on, or take a stand I thought we’d drive right through it pretty quick It’s so cold the snow didn’t stick The problem was, powdery snow’s so light When the wind whips up, it takes flight It only got worse as we went along The car swaying, the wind so strong I could just barely see the center line We all watched for an exit sign At this point, I knew things were getting bad Afraid to stop or go ahead From the car’s rear window, kids watched the stripe Could see through the rear window wipe They'd yell if I strayed from the center line And that happen several times The next thing I know, my CB squaws out “You’re going off right!” it did shout An eighteen wheeler was right behind me His cab so high that he could see The “White Out” went up higher than the car At trucker’s height, he could see far He guided us down the road for a while Said an off ramp is just a mile You should just stay there, till the wind gets low I’m passing on your left, go slow! We thanked him for all the help that he gave He went by, gave a toot and wave We found the ramp and got to a café Sat down and bowed our heads to pray We knew we had much to be thankful for Safely through this and one before A fishtail and spin on the mountain pass This winter driving is my last

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011



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