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Toss a Pebble

I came upon a spring so fresh and clear
Water washed the pebbles clean 
Tiny fish swam so happy and free my dear
Shimmering in the sun gills all a glean
And I closed my eyes and reached down low
A searching for a pebble not a stone
To propel across the waters’ surface all aglow
I the master caster all alone
It felt just right I closed my eyes 
I turned my hand a bit sidewise
It skipped across the springs clear edge
Remarkable as if it were possessed
And revolved itself in the whirlpool 
A hapless pebble skipped back to a fool
I cast it out but again in awe I watched
It skidded the surface a marvel unmatched
A wondrous sight to my eyes alone
A pebble skipper quite at home.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2018




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Date: 5/15/2018 9:59:00 AM
One of life's simple pleasures that always makes one feel young. I love this one Kelli!
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Kelli White
Date: 6/12/2018 8:27:00 AM
So true. Life’s freedom.
Date: 5/7/2018 8:28:00 PM
Kelli, I had forgotten how much fun that used to be - skipping a pebble over water. And i had forgotten how clear spring water is, and tasty too. Your poem has reminded me of things I had hoped to never forget.Thank you!
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Kelli White
Date: 5/8/2018 7:29:00 AM
Remember walking barefoot and the tiny fish coming close mouths gaping wide. Such fun. Thank you again

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