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Torturous Death

The worst hell Has not yet come It’s just a matter Of burning time I have felt The incredible pain That has befallen me In this difficult hour I’m being torn Ripped apart I’m destroyed And utterly dismayed I live in terror An extreme horror In burning embers Flames all around I burn in the fire Hurting every pore Of my terrified life So miserable and deadly So much the feeling Of tearing death Killing every part Of my pathetic soul I will forever reside In this fiery hell A place where I will finally Rot and die Russell Sivey

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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Date: 8/5/2011 2:19:00 AM
WOW..very impressive writing..Deep...jo
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Date: 8/1/2011 11:36:00 PM
A roaring out pour of emotion, carefully chosen words to make the reader feel this, very well done.
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