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Tortured Jack

Slowly singled out Squash are sawed and set alight All for one dark night

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Beata Agustin

Date: 4/17/2024 12:54:00 AM

I greet you with the love of the Lord, expressed by John 3:16 of the Bible, "For God so loved the world, that he gave his only begotten Son, that whosoever believeth in him should not perish, but have everlasting life." Be blessed.

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 2/8/2016 1:16:00 PM

LYDIA, Enjoyed the way you expressed every line. Please keep writing and sharing your poetry. LOVE LINDA

Vicky Tsiluma

Date: 11/3/2012 4:02:00 AM

Well written piece! Brings out the walls closing in emotions very well. Nice!

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 11/1/2012 4:14:00 PM

Lydia, congratulations in Tracie's fun "~Spooky Ku'~ contest. wishing you the best always :-) PD

Bukang Liwayway

Date: 10/31/2012 8:10:00 AM

congrats on your win. happy halloween :)

Barbara Gorelick

Date: 10/30/2012 5:46:00 PM

Puts a new perpective on things ! lol. Congrats to you. BG

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 10/30/2012 1:59:00 PM

very original. I enjoy this one. Congrats on your win.

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 10/30/2012 6:36:00 AM

Congratulations on your poem winning in Tracie's "Spooky Ku" contest Lydia. Love, Carol

Mandy Tams The Golden Girl

Date: 10/30/2012 2:32:00 AM

Congratulations on your spooky ku win Lydia xx

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 10/30/2012 2:26:00 AM

Congratulations with your spooky Halloween Haiku poems! - Hoping for a scary Halloween night - oxox / / Anne-Lise :) Booooo

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 10/24/2012 5:26:00 AM

A warm welcome to PoetrySoup I offer to you this morning Lydia. I wish for you the best in your writing endeavors whatever they may be. Hoping you find even more inspiration by reading some of the poetry written here by other poets. Thank you for sharing your writing with us. Love, Carol

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 10/24/2012 2:35:00 AM

Wooow....well written Lydia. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Jon A Cavanaugh

Date: 10/23/2012 9:58:00 PM

What a lovely Jack-O-Lantern poem. I like the title too. Bravo!