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Tortured Jack

Slowly singled out
Squash are sawed and set alight
All for one dark night

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012




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Date: 2/8/2016 1:16:00 PM
LYDIA, Enjoyed the way you expressed every line. Please keep writing and sharing your poetry. LOVE LINDA
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Date: 11/3/2012 4:02:00 AM
Well written piece! Brings out the walls closing in emotions very well. Nice!
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Date: 11/1/2012 4:14:00 PM
Lydia, congratulations in Tracie's fun "~Spooky Ku'~ contest. wishing you the best always :-) PD
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Date: 10/31/2012 8:10:00 AM
congrats on your win. happy halloween :)
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Date: 10/30/2012 5:46:00 PM
Puts a new perpective on things ! lol. Congrats to you. BG
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Date: 10/30/2012 1:59:00 PM
very original. I enjoy this one. Congrats on your win.
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Date: 10/30/2012 6:36:00 AM
Congratulations on your poem winning in Tracie's "Spooky Ku" contest Lydia. Love, Carol
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Date: 10/30/2012 2:32:00 AM
Congratulations on your spooky ku win Lydia xx
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Date: 10/30/2012 2:26:00 AM
Congratulations with your spooky Halloween Haiku poems! - Hoping for a scary Halloween night - oxox / / Anne-Lise :) Booooo
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Date: 10/24/2012 5:26:00 AM
A warm welcome to PoetrySoup I offer to you this morning Lydia. I wish for you the best in your writing endeavors whatever they may be. Hoping you find even more inspiration by reading some of the poetry written here by other poets. Thank you for sharing your writing with us. Love, Carol
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Date: 10/24/2012 2:35:00 AM
Wooow....well written Lydia. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 10/23/2012 9:58:00 PM
What a lovely Jack-O-Lantern poem. I like the title too. Bravo!
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