"toronto Classic"

For: Scavenger Hunt
In Honor of: ~Constance~Rambling Poet

Rambling around in a traffic jam,
Poetess naked and on the lam.
  Constance’s very neat trick,
  Behind a thin chopstick,
In the buff, dreaming a bluff, dream scam!!

Though diligently she did try,
`T was a failure to dignify,
   By her most classic stance,
   For without any pants,
Did lose her chance she had to buy!!

Note: From Constance's Poem "Traffic Jam"
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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Devonshire Avatar
August 15, 2010 at 11:52 AM
Congratulations on your success in the contest, dear friend. Love, Carolyn
Kendrick Avatar
August 15, 2010 at 11:41 AM
Congratulations on your win..Good job..Sara
Brown Avatar
August 15, 2010 at 8:58 AM
My congratulations John to you on your win in Constance ~ A Rambling Poet's contest "Scavenger Hunt". Love, Carol
Sweetheart Avatar
August 15, 2010 at 7:39 AM
Congrats Moses on your winning poem in the Scavenger Hunt contest with this amazing and awesome write from your gifted pen.. enjoy this happy Sunday.. with luv.. in Italy..yeah..luv..
Mehta Avatar
August 14, 2010 at 9:35 PM
Congrats on the win, John
Kendrick Avatar
August 6, 2010 at 3:37 PM
Interesting thoughts penned.Sara
Fraser Avatar
August 6, 2010 at 11:52 AM
Oh my, lovely Limerick John. Eyes closed now. Thank you for your always kind comments, you are a true gentleman. Have a lovely weekend >> James
Guzzi Avatar
August 6, 2010 at 4:59 AM
grin...work work work on that meter dear! YES you have Pink Shoelaces! And since Agape led you to my verse Idella perhaps you are being shown we are not as different as you think? Sometimes the more alike you are the harder it is to communicate ;) Love's Ya
Horsman Avatar
August 6, 2010 at 2:11 AM
excellent on both these John, love them, good luck in the contest. Harry
Devonshire Avatar
August 5, 2010 at 4:05 PM
Very creative, John!! I love what you did with her poem and your own interpretation. I chose one of her more serious poems. Constance writes great narratives. Love, Carolyn
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August 5, 2010 at 6:43 AM
Moses, this is funny--I hope constance likes it--some people don't like their name in the poem and get offended.
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August 5, 2010 at 2:54 AM
Well, Moses, you have peeked my curiosity. What was the date of her original poem? I'd like to read it, too. Good luck in the contest. Dane
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