Tornado

It came spiraling recklessly,
and they let it carry them anywhere
it wanted to go. There were trees,
fishing nets, a tractor, a swinging chair,
people.....anything that crossed
its path.

Neighbors who lived secret lives
were exposed;
a cow was so air-sick that it puked
out a boy's toy he thought was
stolen by his father,
to sell to get gambling money;
pens rubbed themselves against books,
writing stories that no one had the courage
to write about himself or herself.....
everyone could see the reality in the eye
of the tornado. Soon,
the tornado faded and left them vulnerable,
naked, puzzled.

"Truth can be so messy,"
an old lady whispered.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2016

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May 25, 2016 at 11:38 PM
"pens rubbed themselves against books, writing stories that no one had the courage to write about himself or herself..." You do have an imagination, Teddy. This was thought-provoking for me, in the idea that at any moment, a force of nature can blow in, tearing off people's facades, revealing people's hidden secrets ... perhaps the moral is to not wear any masks. Original narrative.
Kimathi Avatar
May 28, 2016 at 5:45 AM
..........another problem with the tornado or tornadoes is that they can't be detected or avoided, lolest. Well, thanks Timothy, for enjoying my piece!! :-)
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