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Tornado

Tornado

The hole in the sky
is just above my house. 
I look up... 
and see, 
that...
"He",
 looks 
down 
at 
me.

He keeps His eyes on my every move, 
as He knows... 
I am truly
lost.
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Dietrich Avatar
May 11, 2021 at 2:58 PM
I like this one. It could be God or it could be the "eye" of the storm. Let's hope it's God to rescue you!
Wolf Avatar
May 10, 2021 at 4:15 PM
The Eye in the sky will help relocate and refocus you. Never fear, gw
Foster Avatar
May 11, 2021 at 6:51 AM
Wise words, from a wise man... Ever that the Lord is near... Have a remarkable day... to be remembered ... Ann
Pettit Avatar
May 10, 2021 at 1:09 PM
The clouds won't block His view. Nice inspirational write.
Foster Avatar
May 11, 2021 at 6:50 AM
Thank you for your kind words. Prayers for a lovely day ... to you and yours... Ann
Poet Avatar
May 8, 2021 at 3:39 AM
Hi Ann, If you realize and behold God's grace in all this forgiveness, that is how you can be brought into the greatest life possible. Blessings
Foster Avatar
May 10, 2021 at 12:36 PM
It is a joy to be in the palm of his hand... Have a truly blessed day....
Krutsinger Avatar
May 7, 2021 at 10:34 PM
He knows, and you know Him, so it will all work out nicely.
Foster Avatar
May 10, 2021 at 12:35 PM
:) I like to make him laugh now and then. :)
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