Tornadic Activity

Terrible tornados toppled trees tearing trenches through the terrain,
“Took my tonsils,” told Timmy Thompson, “like taking a tongue twister train.”
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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Freeman Avatar
October 30, 2011 at 8:00 AM
A bit like the cut of the Haiku, Charles is teaching us about. In fact, this could be shorten into a great Haiku. I hope you don't mind the well intended critique. If so I will refrain in the future. Agape, Moses
Freeman Avatar
October 30, 2011 at 7:59 AM
Top line was going well Tony... the bottom...if I could offer a little personal constructive criticism...becomes a bit far fetched, Okay? The top line though is immaculate Alliteration, the bottom line stands alone in its own Alliteration. Both are good, but don't fit well together in the same Alliteration. cont...
Wesley Avatar
October 15, 2011 at 4:15 PM
You sure know how to inject the humor. Such fun to enjoy!
Dixon Avatar
October 12, 2011 at 11:02 AM
Very well done Tony. I can't help but to re-read it, however difficult it may be. Robert
Freeman Avatar
October 5, 2011 at 7:28 PM
Smile, nice one Tony. The best to you. Agape, Moses
Johnson Avatar
October 3, 2011 at 6:02 PM
i see the twist aint been mist, the turkey twaddles round town, on ya cobber...
Ball Avatar
October 3, 2011 at 4:45 PM
What a great tongue twister. Good job Tony. God Bless, :) JB :)
Horne Avatar
October 3, 2011 at 3:46 PM
LOL, wow, I can't say that even slowly : )
Onclaud Avatar
October 3, 2011 at 1:32 PM
my tongue is tied up, tony! :) huggs, nette
Merryman Avatar
October 3, 2011 at 9:36 AM
Good one, Tony! Kim
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