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Torn Within

Left behind and torn within tears of pain and alone at the end without my family or a friend Now I have to start all over again Each day is a struggle to go on and no matter what I always have to be strong I dont think life is fare but thats how it is when they dont care I gotta do everything I can because noone offers me a helping hand but on my own I have to stand

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Peter Perez

Date: 1/1/2015 6:30:00 AM

That is a excellent poem very touching but you said you have noone to give you a helping hand but really you fid you just didn't love me the way i loved you

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 10/14/2009 4:12:00 AM

I would like to welcome you to PoetrySoup Peter. I also wish you the best in your writing endeavors. If you have questions please feel free to ask anyone here. We are all willing to help and if we don't know the answer we will find someone who does. Love, Carol

P Sheart

Date: 10/13/2009 8:16:00 PM

Hi Peter, Sad but very heartfelt and real. Life is hard sometimes but even though we have to stand on our own, we do. Keep your spirit strong. I want to welcome you to poetry soup and I look forward to reading more of your poems. Keep writing and I'll keep reading. Take care hun. Love Light Truth Patty

Priscilla Cruz

Date: 10/13/2009 7:28:00 PM

Very well written I love it how much it relates to other people including me...But I assure you,you will one day have "a helping hand" <3 Cilla Jaye

Marty Owens

Date: 10/13/2009 5:43:00 PM

I enjoyed reading your poem tonight...Marty

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 10/13/2009 4:49:00 PM

It's sad to feel so alone, Peter, but as you say, we have to learn to stand on our own. I hope you find some comfort from "a helping hand." Love, Carolyn